Potions and Snitches
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Title: The First Potions Class 05 Aug 2008 6:16 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, too bad you did not have your book with you. Remember though that it does not have to be exactly like the book because this is your own story. You can do anything you like! It's like a playground! Lol. I don't think you need the words from HP and the SS in italics, just a disclaimer like the one you have in the authors note should be fine. Let the words flow with the others, (blink) I sound like I'm in lotus position. I think it was good. I love Neville so I hope he will become one of Harry's friends. I do hope Malfoy does not become friends with Dudley. I can see him having Dudley around to make Harry misrible but not as a friend friend, you know? It seems like they would always be fighting for head bad guy position, lol.

    Author's Response:

    I know, i just like to make sure I don't end up butchering the original book too much.

    But my book is in Sweden, and I'm in America, so what can I do?

    We should all strive for the writing nirvana ;)

     

    I can't really picture Dudley being friends with Malfoy either, since, as you say, they'd just fight about who should be the leader... :P  

Title: The First Potions Class 31 Jul 2008 12:25 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great fic! Update soon
Title: The First Potions Class 29 Jul 2008 1:02 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting beginnig!
Title: The First Potions Class 29 Jul 2008 11:46 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    As I said when I read Philosopher's Stone...poor HArry!

    ~LesleY~
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 5:42 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. We have some work to do here to get Severus to see Harry as Harry rather than James. I can't wait to find out how Dudley helps with this process. Having him there throws some new interest into the usual potion. ;-)

    Author's Response: I'm going to try to be as original as I can without spoiling the magic of the original book. Let's see how I  succeed. :p
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story. I've only ever read one other story of Dudley going to Hogwarts and in that one he was friends with Harry. I'm very curious as to how his presence will change the story. I read you were looking for a beta, and if you still need one I would be happy to do so. Drop me a line if you want, I'm on the internet at least an hour every day.
    Thanks, and please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and the offer to beta this. I'd be really grateful if you'd like to do it!!! :)
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 12:11 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Snape's nasty! Will he find out about Dudley's bullying? Please keep writing. (:

    Author's Response:

    Snape is pretty mean most of the time. He can't help it, poor guy.

    Yup, people will defintely start noticing that all isn't peaches and cream at Private Drive. 

Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 12:00 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter - even though it's short, you've managed to show the unity of the Slytherins vs. the Gryffindors.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
    I'm aiming to write longer next time. :)

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