| Title: Fit in
| 22 Aug 2008 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Just_A_Fan (Anonymous)
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Wow, didn't see all that coming. XD Great chapter - makes us feel bad for Harry all over again. Too bad we can't have Dudley à la Marge, cause that'd be funny (he'd have to inflate humungously just to get in the air though..)
Ooooh! Harry's in trouble. Was Severus using Legillimency on Harry in the classroom? If he was what did he see? And how much trouble is Harry going to get in? Please you have to update soon! By the way, if you want me to beta, just send the chapter to munchkin5258@yahoo.com, and I'll beta and send it back, just give your e-mail address. As I think I said last time, I'm on the computer at least once a day, so I should get back to you very quickly!
Munchkin
Author's Response: Thanks dear :)
I sent you the next chapter.
Thanks again!
*takes brownie* I can't wait to see what happens when Harry goes to his detention, especially if Snape knows that Harry has 'attacked' one of his Slytherins. You've got an interesting take on Harry, I like the way you have him unaware of his heritage because Hagrid never came to meet him. Nice bonding scene with Neville earlier :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
I liked the Neville scene myself, and I like him as a character. He's just so nice, but oh so awkward.
| Title: Fit in
| 06 Aug 2008 9:21 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yay! I've been waiting for the update. Another one soon- please?!
YAY!!! HARRY HIT DUDDERS!!!! HATE THAT NAME!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, yeah dudley's nicknames are... interesting... thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Fit in
| 05 Aug 2008 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: myril (Anonymous)
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just found your story - and I really like it. Just one question. Dudley seems to get on well with Draco. Doesn't he know that Dudley is muggleborn or is he less predjudiced in your story ( also, how do the rest of the Slytherins react to a muggleborn classmate)
Author's Response: Thanks!
That'll come up soon. Next chapter or the one after it, I think.
I like brownies and vanilla ice cream if you're taking orders....
I did not see this chapter so you can forget all the things I said about POV in the last review, lol. I'm glad you went with Harry though! Cool chapter, angst rocks. I want to see Harry fight back. It would be cool to see if Snape saw them beating up Harry. Maybe bring back some memories? (cackle) What will he do to Harry? Please don't leave me in suspense. (I'm melting!) Hurry, update quick! Please, :)
Author's Response: Lol, sorry I ended up replying to all of your reviews. :P
You leave such lovely long reviews :D I'll write more as soon as I can. Hopefully before Saturday, since I'm going away for the weekend and won't have a computer. We only had cookie dough ice cream, would that work? We have hot chocolate fudge too! :D
I don't want brownies. I want another chapter!! Please?? I do have a question though, isn't Dudley a year older than Harry? Or are we just pretending he's the same age? Other than that, I do love the story.
Author's Response: Is he? I didn't know that.
I just assumed they were the same age and in the same school year. Dudley had a birthday in the beginning of Philosopher's stone... And that was just before summer break, because when Harry got out of his cupboard again, summer vacation had started... So for the sake of the story, we'll assume he turned eleven than. :) Thanks so much for your kind words :D
| Title: Fit in
| 05 Aug 2008 5:19 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Oh, that poor kid. I'd break Dudley's nose if I were you, Harry—he'll probably look better that way.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, Harry doesn't really have an easy life.
Thank you!! :)
Good, hit him back. Oops, maybe fighting at school isn't so good.
Author's Response: Nope, not really. :P Thanks for reviewing!!!
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