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Title: Balance beam 05 Feb 2009 3:31 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm getting addicted to this story and I'd love to read more. I can't decide what I would most like to read next; Snape's discovery of Harry's true treatment, or more contention between the two - their canon relationship has always fascinated me. I'm sure that whatever you decide will be fantastic anyway. I like how you've got the story all in Harry's POV - and I also like how he's managed to regain the courage to fight back. Loved the cliched detention ;) your version was fun to read and I'm looking forward to the next chapter - whenever that may be!

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks :D
    Since I love your story I'm so proud you like mine :D

    I've a new chapter half-written, so I'll try to put it up soon.

Title: Balance beam 30 Dec 2008 12:25 am
Reviewer: Texa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is great! I think you should make Dudley get in trouble with Snape or have Malfoy call him a mudblood.
Title: Balance beam 02 Sep 2008 8:43 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I must have the clotted cream! This story is turning out really well. Nice aprehension about what Snape will do when he finds out about Dudley! Though I must admit I'm suprised that he didn't already know. You made me gasp when Harry stuck his foot out and Snape soared to the floor!!

    Author's Response:

    Well, it took Dudley a while to recover a little and i think he's trying to figure out the best way to tell snape. and he knew harry had detention and he wants to tell him in private. :p

    thanks for reviewing and for your kind words!
    (i just took scones out of the oven, as a matter of fact, so you're welcome to have as many as you like ;))

Title: Balance beam 02 Sep 2008 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Alecto (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please keep writing, xD
Title: Balance beam 02 Sep 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Yes, we have to do the obligatory "detention with Snape where hopefully he figures out something about Harry" but this one was well-written and it flowed well. I'll be interested to see the results.
Title: Balance beam 31 Aug 2008 11:39 pm
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'd never have known you weren't a native English speaker if you hadn't said so. I've read many fics by native speakers that had a lot more grammar and spelling mistakes. Good job!
Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 11:25 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good good good! Loving it! Update again soon.
Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 5:11 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! Harry broke Dudley's nose! :D Did you do that just for me? ;) Anyway, great chapter, and your Snape was just fine. Nasty berk that he is.

    Can't wait for more!
Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the fact that Harry fought back and punched Dudley. I don't think I've ever seen that in fanfiction...True, the detention is cliche but can we expect anything else from Snape? The chapter felt really short though; it could be because I was really into it and just wanted more, but also, there was only the finished half of one scene and one other. That's just me whining though.

    I can't wait to see how it's all going to play out!

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