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Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 11:25 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good good good! Loving it! Update again soon.
Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 5:11 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! Harry broke Dudley's nose! :D Did you do that just for me? ;) Anyway, great chapter, and your Snape was just fine. Nasty berk that he is.

    Can't wait for more!
Title: Balance beam 29 Aug 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the fact that Harry fought back and punched Dudley. I don't think I've ever seen that in fanfiction...True, the detention is cliche but can we expect anything else from Snape? The chapter felt really short though; it could be because I was really into it and just wanted more, but also, there was only the finished half of one scene and one other. That's just me whining though.

    I can't wait to see how it's all going to play out!
Title: Fit in 22 Aug 2008 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, didn't see all that coming. XD Great chapter - makes us feel bad for Harry all over again. Too bad we can't have Dudley à la Marge, cause that'd be funny (he'd have to inflate humungously just to get in the air though..)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 22 Aug 2008 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How wonderful! I love your style, it is very reminiscent of the actual books. You give the exact deviations (or better) that people would expect with having Dudley there, but the way you say it prevents any déjà-vu feeling.

    Great job!
Title: Fit in 06 Aug 2008 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh! Harry's in trouble. Was Severus using Legillimency on Harry in the classroom? If he was what did he see? And how much trouble is Harry going to get in? Please you have to update soon! By the way, if you want me to beta, just send the chapter to munchkin5258@yahoo.com, and I'll beta and send it back, just give your e-mail address. As I think I said last time, I'm on the computer at least once a day, so I should get back to you very quickly!
    Munchkin

    Author's Response: Thanks dear :)
    I sent you the next chapter.

    Thanks again!
Title: Fit in 06 Aug 2008 2:11 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    *takes brownie* I can't wait to see what happens when Harry goes to his detention, especially if Snape knows that Harry has 'attacked' one of his Slytherins. You've got an interesting take on Harry, I like the way you have him unaware of his heritage because Hagrid never came to meet him. Nice bonding scene with Neville earlier :D

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!
    I liked the Neville scene myself, and I like him as a character. He's just so nice, but oh so awkward.

     

     

Title: Fit in 06 Aug 2008 9:21 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! I've been waiting for the update. Another one soon- please?!
Title: Fit in 05 Aug 2008 8:16 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!!! HARRY HIT DUDDERS!!!! HATE THAT NAME!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, yeah dudley's nicknames are... interesting...

     

    thanks for reviewing! 

Title: Fit in 05 Aug 2008 8:44 am
Reviewer: myril (Anonymous) [Report This]
    just found your story - and I really like it. Just one question. Dudley seems to get on well with Draco. Doesn't he know that Dudley is muggleborn or is he less predjudiced in your story ( also, how do the rest of the Slytherins react to a muggleborn classmate)

    Author's Response: Thanks!
    That'll come up soon. Next chapter or the one after it, I think.

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