I like brownies and vanilla ice cream if you're taking orders....
I did not see this chapter so you can forget all the things I said about POV in the last review, lol. I'm glad you went with Harry though! Cool chapter, angst rocks. I want to see Harry fight back. It would be cool to see if Snape saw them beating up Harry. Maybe bring back some memories? (cackle) What will he do to Harry? Please don't leave me in suspense. (I'm melting!) Hurry, update quick! Please, :)
Author's Response: Lol, sorry I ended up replying to all of your reviews. :P
You leave such lovely long reviews :D I'll write more as soon as I can. Hopefully before Saturday, since I'm going away for the weekend and won't have a computer. We only had cookie dough ice cream, would that work? We have hot chocolate fudge too! :D
Harry is suicidal! He must be, who does that to Snape and lives? Um, I would like Harry's pov. Skiping around from POV to POV get's me confused and I like to see the main characters feelings that you can not read about if you are in another persons POV. I guess you could do multiple POV's, that would be cool but maybe not for you. I stay stick with Harry. This is my overall favorite chapter! The scene with Nevile was so sweet, it made me smile. Thank you for writing it! You're brilliant!
Author's Response: We will see, won't we ;) Yeah, that's what I think too. Especially since these are shorter chapters, i think it might be confusing if i start switching POVs.
Thank you so much for reviewing, and reading, it means so much! :)
| Title: The First Potions Class
| 05 Aug 2008 6:16 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter, too bad you did not have your book with you. Remember though that it does not have to be exactly like the book because this is your own story. You can do anything you like! It's like a playground! Lol. I don't think you need the words from HP and the SS in italics, just a disclaimer like the one you have in the authors note should be fine. Let the words flow with the others, (blink) I sound like I'm in lotus position. I think it was good. I love Neville so I hope he will become one of Harry's friends. I do hope Malfoy does not become friends with Dudley. I can see him having Dudley around to make Harry misrible but not as a friend friend, you know? It seems like they would always be fighting for head bad guy position, lol.
Author's Response: I know, i just like to make sure I don't end up butchering the original book too much. But my book is in Sweden, and I'm in America, so what can I do?
We should all strive for the writing nirvana ;) I can't really picture Dudley being friends with Malfoy either, since, as you say, they'd just fight about who should be the leader... :P
I don't want brownies. I want another chapter!! Please?? I do have a question though, isn't Dudley a year older than Harry? Or are we just pretending he's the same age? Other than that, I do love the story.
Author's Response: Is he? I didn't know that.
I just assumed they were the same age and in the same school year. Dudley had a birthday in the beginning of Philosopher's stone... And that was just before summer break, because when Harry got out of his cupboard again, summer vacation had started... So for the sake of the story, we'll assume he turned eleven than. :) Thanks so much for your kind words :D
| Title: Fit in
| 05 Aug 2008 5:19 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Oh, that poor kid. I'd break Dudley's nose if I were you, Harry—he'll probably look better that way.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, Harry doesn't really have an easy life.
Thank you!! :)
Good, hit him back. Oops, maybe fighting at school isn't so good.
Author's Response: Nope, not really. :P Thanks for reviewing!!!
Oh good Lord, what on is earth is Snape going to do after that shenanigan?
Author's Response: We'll see.... ... :P
I haven't really decided yet though. :p
poor Harry - showing those Gryffendoor traits so early. It was a nice save for Neville - but Snape is going to use him for potion ingredients.
Author's Response: I'm sure Snape will be very creative ^
OMG! Has Harry got a death wish? Tripping Snape!!!!
What is Snape going to do to him? Use him as potions ingrediants?
Harry isn't a Gryffindor for nothing, is he?
Love your story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Harry is a bit reckless sometimes. and we all know he has this 'saving people thing'. I just wanted it to manifest itself a little earlier in the story, because this is an AU and some stuff have changed...
| Title: The First Potions Class
| 31 Jul 2008 12:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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