Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The First Potions Class 29 Jul 2008 1:02 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting beginnig!
Title: The First Potions Class 29 Jul 2008 11:46 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    As I said when I read Philosopher's Stone...poor HArry!

    ~LesleY~
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 29 Jul 2008 11:37 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene with Snape was a good build up. But I so hope our potions master is not going to prefer Dudley to Harry.

    But as he is a Slytherin, I suppose that's a given.

    Still interested in seeing where this is going.

    I take it that Harry knows nothing about his parents or his Gringotts account as Hagrid doesnt seem to be in the equation.

    ~wrappedinharry~

    Author's Response:

    Oh, well spotted.
    Harry has missed out on a couple of things since Hagrid didn't pick him up. But he wil meet Hagrig eventually :)

    Thanks for reviewing!!! 

Title: A life not including Dudley 29 Jul 2008 11:16 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely written and a great premise for a story. I have read fics where the language is nowhere near as good as yours is...only a few mistakes, so the language thing is not really a problem.

    Onto chapter 2

    ~Wrappedinharry~
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 5:42 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. We have some work to do here to get Severus to see Harry as Harry rather than James. I can't wait to find out how Dudley helps with this process. Having him there throws some new interest into the usual potion. ;-)

    Author's Response: I'm going to try to be as original as I can without spoiling the magic of the original book. Let's see how I  succeed. :p
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story. I've only ever read one other story of Dudley going to Hogwarts and in that one he was friends with Harry. I'm very curious as to how his presence will change the story. I read you were looking for a beta, and if you still need one I would be happy to do so. Drop me a line if you want, I'm on the internet at least an hour every day.
    Thanks, and please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and the offer to beta this. I'd be really grateful if you'd like to do it!!! :)
Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 12:11 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Snape's nasty! Will he find out about Dudley's bullying? Please keep writing. (:

    Author's Response:

    Snape is pretty mean most of the time. He can't help it, poor guy.

    Yup, people will defintely start noticing that all isn't peaches and cream at Private Drive. 

Title: The First Potions Class 28 Jul 2008 12:00 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter - even though it's short, you've managed to show the unity of the Slytherins vs. the Gryffindors.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
    I'm aiming to write longer next time. :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 11 Jun 2008 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Neko Youkia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An excellent story! It's rather interesting to think of how things would be different if Dudley was at Hogwarts. I think the pace is just fine. (I'm rather excited about the thought of Dudley in Snape's Potions class in the next chapter. (Absolutly bound to give Snape a headache, even if he doesn't show it.)

    Author's Response: Thank you.
    And yes, Snape will have quite a year. :P
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 09 Jun 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: IloveSevandHarry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!!! I can't wait to read another chapter!! XD

    Author's Response: New chapter up, I hope you like it :)

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