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Title: A life not including Dudley 08 Jun 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: Cayhleen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah, go Harry! :D
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 07 Jun 2008 12:01 am
Reviewer: joel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pacings good. Perhaps slightly fast, but its difficult to say at this early stage. I really like this so far. I've been hoping to see a fic for a while that explores what would happen if Dudley got into Hogwarts (without him suddenly becoming nice to Harry!)

    Keep writing, and hurry up, i'm excited! :D

    Author's Response: New chapter up, I hope you like it.

    I will try to keep everyone in character, and make everything as realistic as I can.
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 05 Jun 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved this story

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:39 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying the little things that have changed since Dudley is at Hogwarts. Now I'm eager to see just how observant Snape is in your story.

    Author's Response: I think it's hard to decide how much should change, but I'm glad to hear you like it. :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 4:12 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In many stories Harry did not do well in Muggle Primary School because he could not bring home a report which showed that he did better than Dudley so Harry might deliberately decided to do poorly in his classes I hope teachers like Snape realise that he is not performing his best and decide to stop this attitude. Right now Snape might be mean but with Harry wearing second hand clothes and I'm sure with second hand books and equipment and with Dudley informing the others about Harry being a freak Snape is going to figure out quickly that Harry is not like his rich spoilt father but that he is bullied and abused at home. Hope Snape decides to help Harry.

    Author's Response:

    I'd forgotten that, actually, but you're right... So many new ideas!

     

Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:48 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, fast update! Yay you! Fast updates rock, :) Sean? Seamus?, Harry thought) gripped his arm lightly (I think you need a period here) Great job so far! Congrats on all your reviews! I don't think it's going to slow. Will Draco be in this story a lot or just as a regular character?
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Thanks :)

    Right now, I'm trying to decide how Draco's relationship will be with Dudley, and that will also decide how much he'll in the story.
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:20 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The story seems to be going fine. And for not having a Beta, you are doing a great job. I'm a little leary because this seems like Harry's life is going from bad to worse. I really try to avoid those type of stories. So far, Harry has been abandoned in the wizarding world like he had been in the muggle world. You don't want to know what I think about that. After all, how can they ignore Harry's abusive family if it happens right infront of their faces? Hopefully, you are a creative writer and will have some surprises in store for us.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for the warning.
    I really want to try not to be clichéed, but it's hard :p I will try to keep it somewhat realistic at least.
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:00 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again great job!!!!!!!! As i said before i look forward to future updates.
    Thanks for reading and writing.
    P.S Did anyone see Dudley do that to Harry? just wondering.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

    Nope, most people were eating breakfast, and it was just bad luck, really, that they ended up in the same hallway.
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been wanting to see more fics where Dudley gets a letter from Hogwarts. More please...

    Plus, writing this will no doubt help you with your English! Another reason to write more.

    (^_^)/
    BEM
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 1:15 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the interaction with Dudley, and your reasoning behind Harry bonding with Ron works well - I'd completely forgotten that he had hand me down robes as well.

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