| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Icepick (Anonymous)
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Haha. This is incredibly weird, but surprisingly amusing. And I am so glad that Snape is getting into trouble. *grins evilly* I hope he gets even more payback for how nasty he has been to Harry (I like fan fiction Snape a lot, so long as he is willing to at least try to redeem himself.)
I would prefer less foul language, though. There's so much of it that it kind of pulls you out of the story. Particularly when Harry is using it—him using the F-word seems OOC.
This is bloody brilliant. I can't wait to read more (well, I guess I can but I will be looking forward to more.)
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please please please please please update again soon!! I love how Sev's friends scowlded him. I can't wait to see what hapens when sev and harry meet again. LOL!
Thanks! :)
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
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I am *loving* this story. I can't wait to see where you take it!
That was...wow....Sevvy is scaring me, but I find this story oddly appealing. Reading the summary, I was unsure if this would be pulled off, but I believe you're doing it. Good job and good luck!
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 7:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Tarsie (Anonymous)
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Brilliant beginning - can't wait to read the rest.
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 6:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Love it so far, hope the trio spends their summer with this group I'm sure they would learn a lot...love this snape…sure Harry and the gang would love and trust this snape and his friends too…update soon
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous)
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neat story idea, you might want to re-read and correct a few silly mistakes for example I don't think Severus "Pooped" the CD into the radio, he probably "Popped" it in.
There was another one towards the end, Snape was speaking but I can't find it atm.
Keep Writing!
Author's Response: That's an amazing typo and def just made my day. It's fixed though, thanks for pointing it out!
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 26 Jun 2008 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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this is an interesting start. I like how unique the situation is. All the dialogue is a little overpowering though, with so many descriptions of the actions that could go along with them but don't. I am looking forward to Harry and Snape interacting more, and the story focusing on them. Good start so far!
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