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Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 20 Oct 2014 7:03 am
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, So I Read & Reviewed The First 5 Chapters Over On FanFiction.net Then Came Here, Because The Rest Of The Chapters Aren't Over There. So Here I Am. Reading The Rest Here. I'm Just Going To Leave This Review For Each Chapter 1-5 So I Can Rate The Chapters. But They're All Awesome! XD
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 15 Jul 2011 9:50 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this chapter!
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 19 Aug 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh crap! Not Malfoy! Ugh.

    I loved the party. I loved how happy Harry was and that he's still small enough to be lifted up and thrown into the pool. Seeing Severus teach him how to do the bottle rockets was awesome. I'm really enjoying this story!

    Lizzie was neat. Of course, I have yet to see her interact with Harry and his friends, but so far I like her. I think she's very good for Severus. I want that man to be happy. He needs to marry her this time though! And adopt Harry! And get a dog! And live happily ever after!

    Oh, well, I obviously ask for too much, since Lucius Malfoy is at the door. Things just can't be easy for these people, can they? ;-)

    Looking forward to the next chapter very much! :D
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 11 Jun 2009 10:53 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love Lizzie, what a great way to spend July 4th. It's so easy to picture the bbq the way you wrote it :) I thought it was albus at the door, not lucius. Great chapter.
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 21 May 2009 7:58 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fantastic party!
    And of course Lucius had to show up...can't be ALL fluff.
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 26 Jan 2009 12:13 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh flip! This is bad news! I suppose I should have known that something bad would happen after all of that good stuff. You know, up above you asked for ideas, but it kinda looks like you have an agenda for this thing after all. I was going to suggest that maybe word about Harry being in America would reach either Dumbledore or Voldie and they would come for him here. That would be really exciting!

    -P.G.
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 07 Dec 2008 12:18 am
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story - I had really been hoping you would update it thanks! Please update again soon. I hope harry gains a good father figure in snape - I love this story!
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 30 Nov 2008 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was very, very unusual! I like it though!))
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 26 Nov 2008 1:27 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the party it was great, reminded me of the times when we all got together on the fourth and my nephews threw my brother-in-law in pool with his cell phone. Then he dragged them in too, it was great. And their beagle stole a sparkler and ran all over with it in his mouth, the nutcase!

    I liked Lizzie and I want to know why the heck Lucius is there.

    That sucks about your computer, I had problems like that with my old one and I learned to always make a back-up disk, or CD as the case may be.

    I'll try and come up with some ideas for you, I've finished another story, Arms of A dark Angel, I think it's really good, and am almost finished with my prequel to Never Again as well.

    Send me an outline or something and I'll see what I can come up with.
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 25 Nov 2008 5:59 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i look forward to reading mooorrre!! :o)

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