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Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 25 Nov 2008 4:07 am
Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I really enjoyed that chapter!
    I love the fourth of july!! awesome memories, its really just the best isnt it? you captured that great in this chapter!
    Oh no i haveee to know what happens next! What the HELL is Lucius Malfoy doing?? Everything was just perfect...and then Malfoy had to come...oh no i am really worried...do update quickly!!

    LOVE THIS STORY!
    Great Twistt!
    Kella
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 24 Nov 2008 10:00 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Sorry about your computer! Glad for the update, because I like this story, and Oh, no...a cliffhanger. You meanie! ;-)
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 24 Nov 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    eep! Lucius Malfoy? eep!

    I loved the party, you really brought the magic of the occasion to life. My favourite bits were Severus showing Harry the bottle rockets and Severus and Lizzie. The pool scene was fun too. Lizzie's great; I hope to see more of her!

    Commiserations on the computer, but well done for managing to get writing again - it's just the worst feeling when all your work disappears like that. I'm glad you're continuing though - I love this story! It's so original and enjoyable - plus it's now got me listening to Guns 'N Roses! heh heh.
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 24 Nov 2008 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank Merlin, I was afraid this had been abandoned! So glad it wasn't - as I am a huge fan of this story.

    I loved the 4th celebration, reminded me of growing up in the midwest and the 4th of july pool parties at my uncle's house. Good times, mate!

    Oh, and Lucius... can't wait to see what happens there - Lucius really shouldn't provoke Georgie - not healthy at all!
Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too! 24 Nov 2008 6:27 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! I loved the party, it's great to see the kids have some fun.

    I'd like to see az little more development of Lizzie's character and you totally surprised me by having Lucius show up. What an ending! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Lizzie will be gone into in chapter 6. I wanted to spend time on her and Severus' relationship but I figured I'd be rushed if I did it now. Don't worry, she's a pretty cool chick. :)

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