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Reviews For Impalpable
"I'm a big girl; I wipe my own ass and everything!" -OMG I Love This Woman. She Is Definitely Someone Who Can Keep Up With Snape. XD Lol Origin Alley. I Like How You Kept The HP Theme Of Naming The Alley's, Good Job. XD & OMG! WTF!? Seriously? Can't They Catch A Break? You Know, Have Two Nights Of Peace, Sure The Night Before Was Awesome, But Now It's Back To Terribleness. Poor Harry, He Already Feels Terrible For What Happened, Now An Entire Town In Endangered. I Really Hope That The Wards Hold Up Against An Onslaught Of Death Eaters.
I really like Lizzie, I decided. She's cool. And I like Snape's house. I just hope they can escape this disaster relatively unscathed. ;-)
This story is brilliant so far. I'm really getting a kick out of your characters! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to make them as engaging as possible. :)
Great stroy and interesting chapter!
Okay, so I really love your story. This new version of Snape is such a mystery, with his biker ways and an unmatching house? I can't wait to read more--this is very interesting. -P.G.
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