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Reviews For Impalpable
& Oh Wow, Severus Gave In & Let Harry Win The Water Fight? Shocking! Lol. I Thought It Was Adorable. XD ROTFLOL! I Can Just Imagine What Lizzie Had To Say To Malfoy. I'm Sure She Called Him A Barbie At One Point. XD & Damn, What A Heavy Conversation! That Nearly Made Me Cry When Harry Was Asking About If People Really Should Cope With Some Things. So Emotional!
I really loved this chapter. From the trio falling asleep on the couch together, to the Severus and Lizzie interaction in the morning, to the carwashing nd talking in the afternoon. It was all so good. Again, I am really enjoying your portrayal of the trio. This is one of the few stories where I actually do. Most of the time, Ron and Hermione end up annoying me. But not in this one. I *loved* the talk between Severus and Harry. It was lovely. Harry often comes across as so young and innocent and that's beautiful. It is such a shame that those things may be risked in the defeat of Voldemort. I was so glad that Severus could see that. Great job!
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He's so sexy! I love Severus! The talk he had with Harry was sweet and I hope it encourages Harry to speak more about his problems. Author's Response: I actually couldn't stop giggling when I wrote that part! lol!
Thanks for the review!
My favorite part was with Severus and Harry outside washing the car and talking with Severus. Please keep up the great work and let me know when you want me to look over another chapter. Mmm! The cookies were great. Author's Response: Thank you SO much for all the help you've given me! I really appreciate it. :) |
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