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Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 20 Oct 2014 8:51 am
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn, Lizzie Has A Potty Mouth. & That Little Thing With The 'Sucking' Comment Was Pretty Funny. XD

    & Oh Wow, Severus Gave In & Let Harry Win The Water Fight? Shocking! Lol. I Thought It Was Adorable. XD

    ROTFLOL! I Can Just Imagine What Lizzie Had To Say To Malfoy. I'm Sure She Called Him A Barbie At One Point. XD

    & Damn, What A Heavy Conversation! That Nearly Made Me Cry When Harry Was Asking About If People Really Should Cope With Some Things. So Emotional!
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 15 Jul 2011 10:22 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ooohhh. malfoy gets served! i can hardly wait! on to the next chapter!
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 19 Aug 2009 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, "Edge of Seventeen"... that was neat.

    I really loved this chapter. From the trio falling asleep on the couch together, to the Severus and Lizzie interaction in the morning, to the carwashing nd talking in the afternoon. It was all so good.

    Again, I am really enjoying your portrayal of the trio. This is one of the few stories where I actually do. Most of the time, Ron and Hermione end up annoying me. But not in this one.

    I *loved* the talk between Severus and Harry. It was lovely. Harry often comes across as so young and innocent and that's beautiful. It is such a shame that those things may be risked in the defeat of Voldemort. I was so glad that Severus could see that.

    Great job!
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 21 Jul 2009 5:06 am
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome, awesome, awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next (especially that Malfoy ass-kicking!)
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 03 Jul 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: AvidReader (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story!!
    @(*_*)@
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 14 Jun 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the Malfoy butt kicking.
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 14 Jun 2009 12:44 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    New reader to this story, and I'm loving it!
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 11 Jun 2009 11:23 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope Harry lets Sev in... and lets him help. Love your story, post soon!
Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 11 Jun 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you described Sev's summer in relation to a carton of orange juice. What a neat description! I also liked the conversation with Lizzie and Severus in the kitchen and Lizzie pinching Sev's butt. Great! I'd have pinched it too!

    He's so sexy! I love Severus!

    The talk he had with Harry was sweet and I hope it encourages Harry to speak more about his problems.

    Author's Response:

    I actually couldn't stop giggling when I wrote that part! lol!

     

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Burns and the Edge of Seventeen 11 Jun 2009 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it! But of course, you already knew that, didn't you?

    My favorite part was with Severus and Harry outside washing the car and talking with Severus.

    Please keep up the great work and let me know when you want me to look over another chapter. Mmm! The cookies were great.

    Author's Response: Thank you SO much for all the help you've given me! I really appreciate it. :)

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