| Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too!
| 24 Nov 2008 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter! Sorry about your computer! Glad for the update, because I like this story, and Oh, no...a cliffhanger. You meanie! ;-)
| Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too!
| 24 Nov 2008 8:53 pm
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| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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eep! Lucius Malfoy? eep!
I loved the party, you really brought the magic of the occasion to life. My favourite bits were Severus showing Harry the bottle rockets and Severus and Lizzie. The pool scene was fun too. Lizzie's great; I hope to see more of her!
Commiserations on the computer, but well done for managing to get writing again - it's just the worst feeling when all your work disappears like that. I'm glad you're continuing though - I love this story! It's so original and enjoyable - plus it's now got me listening to Guns 'N Roses! heh heh.
| Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too!
| 24 Nov 2008 7:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous)
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Thank Merlin, I was afraid this had been abandoned! So glad it wasn't - as I am a huge fan of this story.
I loved the 4th celebration, reminded me of growing up in the midwest and the 4th of july pool parties at my uncle's house. Good times, mate!
Oh, and Lucius... can't wait to see what happens there - Lucius really shouldn't provoke Georgie - not healthy at all!
| Title: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too!
| 24 Nov 2008 6:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Amazing chapter! I loved the party, it's great to see the kids have some fun.
I'd like to see az little more development of Lizzie's character and you totally surprised me by having Lucius show up. What an ending! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Lizzie will be gone into in chapter 6. I wanted to spend time on her and Severus' relationship but I figured I'd be rushed if I did it now. Don't worry, she's a pretty cool chick. :)
| Title: No Sleep Till...Queens?
| 09 Sep 2008 9:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Michelle (Anonymous)
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This is brilliant.. the first time i saw Snape, i knew he was a harley rider!! I'm glad you are writing this story!
| Title: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics
| 02 Sep 2008 7:45 pm
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| Reviewer: redriding13 (Anonymous)
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I love the story - am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, pleae don't leave me hanging for too long.
I love the reunion and omg yeah a saw the HBP trailer! Kinda disapointed wit it though, you'd think they'd have the grace to show Snape!!! Oh, well! Anyway great job please keep updating!!!
I love it...please write more
| Title: No Sleep Till...Queens?
| 02 Aug 2008 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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I am so happy that Harry is OK, am sure he is very shaken but he is OK. The two boys Lonnie and Paul were great it shows that there are good samaritans out there and not all of them look like clean cut church going boys – what I like about it is that they asked for no reward or even recognition they did it because they realised that Harry was in trouble. For Harry it would reaffirm that there are good people /muggles out there – not only the two boys but the police as well. However it would also remind him to be cautious as there are also predators and bad people out there who don’t wear DE masks.
| Title: No Sleep Till...Queens?
| 01 Aug 2008 6:35 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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Love it! Please post ASAP!
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