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Reviews For Impalpable
This line had me cracking up: --- "God, she's just like my mother! It's like my mom's soul invades every mother anywhere near me." --- That was hilarious! I love the humor you use in this. It's really awesome. I thought you wrote Mrs. Weasley really well. And she was pretty funny! I loved how she gave them all juice. And what Arthur said about the muggle road trip being fascinating was sooooo in character. I could totally hear him saying that. But honestly, I'll be gad when they're gone. I really liked the atmosphere before the Weasleys and the others from back home showed up. The little flashback scene was lovely. The contrast between young Severus and current (not old!)Severus is very striking. Georgie is so very awesome. I think one of my favorite lines was when he said, "I know that many of them have had a hard time." That was so refreshing. He didn't say that many of them were evil, or turned out bad, etc. He was so honest. If I was Severus, I would have broken down then, too. Lizzie rocks. I love her. 'nuff said. I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Hands down, you've become my favorite reviewer! You are DEDICATED! Thank you so much! All of your reviews made me smile. You made my day! Sorry it took so long to answer. College and all that rot, haha. Anyway, thank you again for all the wonderful reviews!
I really loved this chapter. From the trio falling asleep on the couch together, to the Severus and Lizzie interaction in the morning, to the carwashing nd talking in the afternoon. It was all so good. Again, I am really enjoying your portrayal of the trio. This is one of the few stories where I actually do. Most of the time, Ron and Hermione end up annoying me. But not in this one. I *loved* the talk between Severus and Harry. It was lovely. Harry often comes across as so young and innocent and that's beautiful. It is such a shame that those things may be risked in the defeat of Voldemort. I was so glad that Severus could see that. Great job!
I really like Lizzie, I decided. She's cool. And I like Snape's house. I just hope they can escape this disaster relatively unscathed. ;-)
I loved the party. I loved how happy Harry was and that he's still small enough to be lifted up and thrown into the pool. Seeing Severus teach him how to do the bottle rockets was awesome. I'm really enjoying this story! Lizzie was neat. Of course, I have yet to see her interact with Harry and his friends, but so far I like her. I think she's very good for Severus. I want that man to be happy. He needs to marry her this time though! And adopt Harry! And get a dog! And live happily ever after! Oh, well, I obviously ask for too much, since Lucius Malfoy is at the door. Things just can't be easy for these people, can they? ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter very much! :D
The reference to "Oliver Twist" made me smile, though the situation was still sad. I was so glad to see Severus come and pick him up in NYC. It was all warm fuzzies there! ;-)
That is not good!!! Augh, this is torment. You should appreciate that I am leaving this review, cause I am sooooo ready to just go to the next chapter! ;-) I really liked Snape and Harry talking about music. That was cute!
Usually Ron and Hermione annoy me in fanfics. But not so in this one. You do a marvelous job writing them! |
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