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Reviews For Impalpable
My favorite part was with Severus and Harry outside washing the car and talking with Severus. Please keep up the great work and let me know when you want me to look over another chapter. Mmm! The cookies were great. Author's Response: Thank you SO much for all the help you've given me! I really appreciate it. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, she fantastic! :)
Thanks for the review!
I really loved that serious moment between Harry and Severus when Sev says that he's not alone any more, and when Severus realises how young and small Harry is and that it's not fair that he has to be given such a heavy responsibility at such a young age. Author's Response: I took the midterm, so all is right with the world now. More time for writing, now, I hope! Thank you!
This story is brilliant so far. I'm really getting a kick out of your characters! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to make them as engaging as possible. :)
And of course Lucius had to show up...can't be ALL fluff.
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