Really loved the scene between Lily and Severus, it felt very realistic
Oh, no! Leukemia is such a horrible disease! Poor Lily! But if there's anyone in the wizarding world with the smarts to find a wizarding cure for it, it will be Severus.
You handled this entire scene beautifully. Lily's reactions, Severus's reactions, everything.
If I was Sev I think I'd be perfectly speechless with shock at hearing Lily's last word. I wonder if I'm right?
I'm on to the next chapter to find out. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter three
| 11 Jul 2008 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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Wonderful story and excellent writing. Will be looking forward for more chapters to come
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter three
| 07 Jul 2008 7:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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This story is really good so far. I hope you continue soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I will.
Great chapter, though it was very sad, too.
Lily's line that time was no longer on her side was heartbreaking. I can feel her determination and desperation as she talks with Severus, telling him of her disease and trying to convince him to really see Harry.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll put it up soon!
Loved this chapter! I felt so terrible for Lily and Severus and Harry...I had tears in my eyes. I'm such a mush...I get emotional over characters in movies, books, I think I cried at nearly every Disney movie they made. That's why I can't stand reading depressing fiction and I'm a sucker for happy endings. Hopefully this will end happily for Harry and Sev, at least. I wonder what his response will be to Lily's request?
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping to get some kind of emotional effect.
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