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Reviews For Love Everlasting
Title: Chapter three 03 Jul 2008 1:27 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter! I felt so terrible for Lily and Severus and Harry...I had tears in my eyes. I'm such a mush...I get emotional over characters in movies, books, I think I cried at nearly every Disney movie they made. That's why I can't stand reading depressing fiction and I'm a sucker for happy endings. Hopefully this will end happily for Harry and Sev, at least. I wonder what his response will be to Lily's request?

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping to get some kind of emotional effect.
Title: Chapter two 01 Jul 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder when Severus will find out what's really wrong with Lily? Hopefully, it's nothing really bad, and poor Harry will be left an orphan. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! You'll have to wait and see.

Title: Chapter one 01 Jul 2008 12:17 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'barring'...I think you mean 'bearing'

    But very interesting premise.

    Author's Response: Thank you. Like I said in the begining, spelling and grammer are not my strengths. Sorry about any and all errors in the past, present and future. And unfortunately, there will be.
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 9:49 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    i am sad, i don't want lily to die

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You'll just have to wait and see. I'm hoping to update soon!
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Not boring at all. I love stories that build up slowly and built characters.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it wasn't boring.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it wasn't boring.
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 3:27 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Still interested.

    ~lesleY

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter one 30 Jun 2008 3:19 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    You did very well. A few mistakes, but I have read much worse and the premise of your story is terrific. Though I sincerely hope Lily doesn't die. That would distress me greatly.

    Perhaps Lily should marry Sev and then, as HArry's step-father, the ministry would not be able to intervene if anything happened to Lily.

    I hate the Ministry of Magic.

    I am definitely interested, but please, don't kill Lily.

    ~Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I too hate the Ministry of Magic. As for Lily and death. You'll just have to wait and see. But I'll think about your idea. Thank you for reviewing!  

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I too hate the Ministry of Magic. As for Lily and death. You'll just have to wait and see. But I'll think about your idea. Thank you for reviewing!  
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 2:09 pm
Reviewer: MirzeSnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    keep updating, it a really goo story. thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Title: Chapter two 30 Jun 2008 1:13 pm
Reviewer: Lady Rosewolf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really enjoying the development of this story, pls keep posting.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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