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Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great beginning! I love how determined Lily is...she's going to do what's best for Harry, no matter what anyone says.

    I'd love to learn more about the history of your story, too, such as how Sirius died and how was Voldemort driven away. But hopefully we'll learn more as the story goes along.

    Poor Harry, I know he's worried about his mum (with good reason, it seems), and I feel sorry for him. I like that Severus seems to be willing to see Harry in a new light, too.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy you are liking my story so far. Yes, Lily is a mom on a mission. I'm trying to make her the strong, protective type of parent. As for learning about the history of the story; I'm placing bits and pieces in each chapter. And as for Severus seeing Harry in a new light. I'm afraid I'm guilty of rushing some things and I love softy Sev stories. But I'll try to make it some what realistic. Thanks again.
Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 7:21 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Every interesting story. Which year is this? I gather that Sirius is dead. Did it happen the same way as canon.

    I am looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Harry is in his second year. I don't really want to give anything away, but I will say this, you'll find out very soon. If not in the next chapter than the one after. Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 6:55 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was cute, update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I will update soon.
Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 12:09 pm
Reviewer: Morgana_White (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! Please continue!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I do plan to update soon.
Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 9:28 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    A very good start, though I think maybe a bit more of an explanation of why Dumbledore gave up on the spy and ministry won't allow it thoughts about Snape as Harry's guardian. I really love the plot of your story and I'm anxious for more. So far it seems wonderfully unique and exciting.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry about the rush durring this scene. I do plan to have DD explain why he simply let the matter drop.
Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 8:14 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start. This could be a very interesting story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope my story continues to hold your interest.
Title: Chapter one 29 Jun 2008 7:22 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great start, I like the way you have Lily determined to have a say in Harry's placement and hopefully she can convince Severus that Harry is not just James's shadow.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm very happy you like it so far.


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