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Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so happy to see this chapter. an intriguing beginning and I can hardly wait for more. I so enjoyed "Reading the Signs" and this looks like it will be just as good, if not better. Bravo!

    Author's Response: It's good to know that you find the first chapter intriguing.  That's always the hardest bit ;)  Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh please, Severus, you didn't think this was going to be easy did you? It's more like bringing a puppy home than you thought. Instead of howling in the night, you have a boy camper in the night.
    Excellent story, I hadn't realized we got treated to a sequel.

    Author's Response: Heh, too true.  He didn't quite think it would be "easy", rather it was more "easier than this".  Ah well, he's still learning too :)
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 2:53 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad that you are making a sequel. This is a great start.

    Author's Response: Heh, I wasn't quite done with their story yet.  Thanks for commenting!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 2:07 am
Reviewer: oodlesofmzness (Signed) [Report This]
    So good....thank you!

    Author's Response: You're very welcome!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: pannymoomins (Signed) [Report This]
    yay!!! the next part! i love it, its caught my interest already, i cant wait to read what happens next!!! xx

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so thrilled that there's a continuation of this series *beams* Great chapter - I really like the way Severus made sure that Harry's room was all his, nothing secondhand.

    Author's Response: Snape realized that would be a big deal for Harry, if somewhat unconsciously.  I'm glad he did it that way too!  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 12:51 am
Reviewer: jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! He never apologized or explained why he was late. Perhaps Snape should leave his door open with Harry being allowed to sleep on the couch in Snapes room. That way Snape could get some slep too!

    Author's Response: That's one idea I had considered, actually -- the sleeping in Snape's room thing.  But then I thought it might be a little too "soft" of a reaction from Severus.
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 11:52 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I love the way you write. I like your Harry -- he's young but not too babyish even with his problems and I really like your Severus. Even though this was an angsty chapter, I still chuckled throughout as I read. I especially liked the tour of the house (cellar, check, potions lab which you will not enter upon . . . .) and Harry's thinking "like I would ever enter a potions lab during the summer". I could just visualize the two of them touring the house.

    Thanks so much for writing this sequel!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the compliments.  Harry's personality is tough to write because he is very much walking an emotional tightrope between acting his age and regressing.  I suspect he'll be going back and forth quite a bit in this story.

    I love hearing about the bits people think are funny, because I never actually try to be so it's a nice bonus to receive!

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Angels Broken Shadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is lovely! Fantastic setup to what is already promising to be just as good as Reading The Signs.

    I liked Harry thinking the things in his room all belonged to Luka. That just says so much about his mental state. I also love this idea of him camping outside Severus's room. I can't wait to see where this is going!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  The first chapter is always so difficult to write, although made somewhat easier this time around because of all the background in RTS.  The camping outside Severus' room was the very first thought I had about this sequel, so I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see the first chapter of your sequel, lyra!! And you did a fabulous job, I must say. Snape is very calm and collected in this series, and I could see that side of him developing if given the chance--very believable.

    It'll be interesting to see how Snape and Harry continue to interact throughout the sequel. I can't wait to read more!

    A brilliant start!

    Author's Response:

    I discovered rather early in life that if something is wrong and everyone is panicing, One person always manages to remain calm and collected.  Someone has to right?  Severus has always struck me as that person -- incredibly hard to rattle.  And while Harry seems to throw him off-kilter more easily than anyone or anything else, he still needs to be the steady rock in this arena.  For Harry.

    Thank for reviewing!


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