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Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad to see this! I was just thinking about 'Reading the Signs' the other day, and wondering if you were going to go ahead with the sequel.

    Poor little Harry...he's still so incsecure. I wonder if it some of it is because they're away from Hogwarts, in a home environment, and in the back of his mind Harry isn't sure what to expect from Severus here.

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    A very astute review!  You've managed to capture Harry's state of mind freakishly (heh) well.  He is very insecure still, and Severus, perhaps foolishly, wasn't expecting that.

    He has a lot to learn.

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Squeal!!! I have been crossing my fingers that you would continue your story and here it is! You have a wonderful style - very easy to read. The storyline has got me gripped already, I wonder what is going on in Harry's head. Hmm, whatever it is, I am sure Severus is the man to get to the bottom of it! Great job.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it!  And you're right, Severus will get to the bottom of the issue -- hopefully without pulling his hair out ;)
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:44 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start to this sequel. It gives us a great feel for the fact that, yes, Severus is now Harry's father, but that doesn't mean that all of Harry's issues were automatically solved.

    This little glitch cracked me up: "textile exploration" I think you meant "tactile" which means sense of touch rather than fabric. But maybe Harry wanted to touch just the drapes and bedspread? ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha I totally meant 'tactile' and must have had a weird little mind hiccough.  Thanks for pointing that out.

    You've hit the nail on the head -- they've started something, but Harry isn't "fixed" all of sudden.  And Severus is about to find out just how many issues the boy has.

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:40 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! And yay for a sequel! That was heartbreaking, though. Poor Harry. I am so glad he has Snape. And I just want to pop those Dursleys one. I hope Snape can figure out what is going on with Harry. It was fun to watch them interacting together in the house. Thanks for a great start to a new story. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!  Snape has tried to let Harry resolve his sleep issues naturally, but after a few days he now realizes he must step in.  And so he will, and very quickly.

    Of course that's only the first of their adjustment issues...


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