Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 4 22 Nov 2008 2:36 am
Reviewer: Lina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is a wonderful story I can't wait for more! I love Snape's characterization you have done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next update with great anticipation! ^_^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for taking the time to review!  It's very motivating ;)  So hopefully that means it won't be long before I update!

Title: Chapter 4 30 Oct 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, well phrased.

    'One did not slip anything into Albus Dumbledore’s tea that he did not already want there.' How true!

    I liked the progress Snape has made towards understanding Harry's old situation and the Dumbledore-manipualtion that led Snape to ask Harry questions.

    Author's Response:

    Heh, no one will ever mistake Dumbledore for someone who doesn't pay attention to his surroundings.  He's a brilliant character, and knows exactly how to manipulate those around him.

    Glad you liked his bits.  As much as Severus and Harry are annoyed by him at times, he's been key in helping their relationship.

Title: Chapter 4 29 Oct 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I always enjoy fatherly Snape, even though he's a very AU sort of guy.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, fatherly Snape is definitely AU, to put it mildly.  It's not everyone's cup of tea, which I can understand, but I love it :)
Title: Chapter 4 28 Oct 2008 9:45 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    wow this is great! i love how you are portraying Sev

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 4 28 Oct 2008 3:52 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so happy to see you have updated! I'm really pleasantly surprised. This is the second wonederful story that had not been updated in awhile, that I see here!

    Please don't wait as long to update, I am really enoying your story!

    Author's Response: I think I've already taken too long, but I appreciate your patience and your review.  Life makes it difficult to update, but I'm pretty dedicated to this story....
Title: Chapter 4 28 Oct 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was outstanding. This chapter was perfectly ended the way you took each item in Harry's closet and did the "He tried not to think". Very effective way of focusing the reader's mind on how much abuse he did suffer.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I admit that I like that part too...
Title: Chapter 4 28 Oct 2008 1:01 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating! I really enjoyed this chapter, thought it was rather sad and heart-rending in a way. The part where Harry said only bad, freaky things were kept in the cupboard was just heartbreaking.

    Severus is very close to figuring it out, if he hasn't already. I can't wait for that conversation. And I love how he is with Harry. Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I'm thinking I need to lay of the angst for at least one chapter, but it just happens so naturally, lol.

    Severus certainly has his suspicions.  He's not 100% sure, but he knows the commection between Harry and cupboards cannot be a good thing.

Title: Chapter 4 27 Oct 2008 11:44 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so thrilled that this has been updated :D I love the way you portray Severus and Dumbledore's relationship, and the way Severus is becoming more and more attuned to Harry's needs - holding his hand, etc. Great job.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I think it's important to show that they're both changing, not just Harry.
Title: Chapter 4 27 Oct 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. That was very touching. Especially the part with Harry keeping things in the cupboard, and the last bit where Snape discovers the crackers.
    Great angst.

    I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 4 27 Oct 2008 6:37 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    poor Severus, he didn't stand a chance in front of Albus... And I hope Harry can open up more to Severus

    Author's Response: Heh, no he didn't.  I just love putting him in situations like that!

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