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Title: Chapter 10 21 Oct 2009 2:58 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Why didn't you warn us that we would need tissues. That was so so sweet, and so sad.

    Beautifully written, and just so perfectly possible for Harry to feel that way. I hope that Snape can give Harry everything that he's missed.

    Poor Harry. Severus is really good for him, and has come a long way.

    I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    I'm bad for the tissue-ness.  This is very much an angsty series, because that's the place Harry is in.

    And, if it wasn't clear, he's also very angry.

    I was actually trying to make Severus a little "thick" regarding Harry's needs in this chapter.  Apparently I didn't succeed, lol.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 10 20 Oct 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm glad you updated again! I really enjoyed this chapter so much. Severus and Harry are still struggling to get used to one another and to their new life together.

    I loved that Severus is giving Harry a birthday celebration and it was so sweet when Harry woke him up early to go shopping cause he was so excited. I could just see Harry falling asleep in Severus' bed, too, lol.

    And I loved the scene with little Icarus, and how it made Harry so upset to see him with a loving parent who takes care of him, and know that he was denied that.

    I loved that Severus was so understanding and how he took care of Harry and tried to reassure him...that was lovely!

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    You certainly hit on all the salient points of the chapter.  They really are still trying to understand each other.  Although I'm starting to wonder if I didn't quite get across how much of a struggle that conversation was -- everyone thinks it's so cute, lol. 

    Thanks once again for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 10 20 Oct 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm glad you updated again! I really enjoyed this chapter so much. Severus and Harry are still struggling to get used to one another and to their new life together.

    I loved that Severus is giving Harry a birthday celebration and it was so sweet when Harry woke him up early to go shopping cause he was so excited. I could just see Harry falling asleep in Severus' bed, too, lol.

    And I loved the scene with little Icarus, and how it made Harry so upset to see him with a loving parent who takes care of him, and know that he was denied that.

    I loved that Severus was so understanding and how he took care of Harry and tried to reassure him...that was lovely!

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I'm very behind in responding to reviews...Oops. Better late than never I suppose.

    Anyway, I'm very glad you liked the scene with Icarus.  It was the first idea I had for this fic, actually.

Title: Chapter 10 20 Oct 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a really sweet chapter. Hope you will update the next one soon!

    Author's Response: I'll do my best -- this one was a long time coming!
Title: Chapter 10 20 Oct 2009 6:08 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the new chapter.
    I loved the last scene, where Harry and Snape try to talk. And I can't wait for the birthday party.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they *tried* to talk.  They still have quite a bit of trouble understanding each other, though.

    Glad you liked it.  Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 10 20 Oct 2009 12:00 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor little Harry, that was so sweet of of Severus to understand what he needed and do it despite any embarrassment, can these two get any cuter?? lol, fab to see a new chapter by the way, love this story :D

    Author's Response: Hmm.  Glad you liked it but now I worry that they're *too* cute, lol.  Thanks for the review!

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