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Reviews For Filling the Void
Beautifully written, and just so perfectly possible for Harry to feel that way. I hope that Snape can give Harry everything that he's missed. Poor Harry. Severus is really good for him, and has come a long way. I can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: I'm bad for the tissue-ness. This is very much an angsty series, because that's the place Harry is in. And, if it wasn't clear, he's also very angry. I was actually trying to make Severus a little "thick" regarding Harry's needs in this chapter. Apparently I didn't succeed, lol. Thanks for the review!
I loved that Severus is giving Harry a birthday celebration and it was so sweet when Harry woke him up early to go shopping cause he was so excited. I could just see Harry falling asleep in Severus' bed, too, lol. And I loved the scene with little Icarus, and how it made Harry so upset to see him with a loving parent who takes care of him, and know that he was denied that. I loved that Severus was so understanding and how he took care of Harry and tried to reassure him...that was lovely! Looking forward to more. Author's Response: You certainly hit on all the salient points of the chapter. They really are still trying to understand each other. Although I'm starting to wonder if I didn't quite get across how much of a struggle that conversation was -- everyone thinks it's so cute, lol. Thanks once again for reviewing!
I loved that Severus is giving Harry a birthday celebration and it was so sweet when Harry woke him up early to go shopping cause he was so excited. I could just see Harry falling asleep in Severus' bed, too, lol. And I loved the scene with little Icarus, and how it made Harry so upset to see him with a loving parent who takes care of him, and know that he was denied that. I loved that Severus was so understanding and how he took care of Harry and tried to reassure him...that was lovely! Looking forward to more. Author's Response: I'm very behind in responding to reviews...Oops. Better late than never I suppose. Anyway, I'm very glad you liked the scene with Icarus. It was the first idea I had for this fic, actually.
Author's Response: I'll do my best -- this one was a long time coming!
I loved the last scene, where Harry and Snape try to talk. And I can't wait for the birthday party. Author's Response: Yes, they *tried* to talk. They still have quite a bit of trouble understanding each other, though. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Hmm. Glad you liked it but now I worry that they're *too* cute, lol. Thanks for the review! |
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