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Title: Chapter 9 08 Aug 2009 7:30 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really nice story. Please keep at it!
Title: Chapter 9 06 Aug 2009 6:35 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    this was a really good chapter. I liked how they both missed each other, and I thought Arthur was great with Harry. I can't wait until next chapter which, I'm sure, will have more Harry/Snape interaction.

    Author's Response: I like how everyone seemed to like Arthur :)  And oh yes, there will be much more Harry/Snape interaction next chapter.  I'm excited myself!
Title: Chapter 9 05 Aug 2009 7:09 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter! It was so cute how the Weasley kids were trying so hard to keep Harry distracted and entertained, even if it did backfire, and Molly and Arthur are the best.

    I particularly the glimpses of Severus, and how lost he is without Harry around now.

    And the ending was perfect! I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it ;)  The bits with Severus were fun to write, but I did want them kept short.  I felt that was more in keeping with Snape.  He isn't the type to go on and on about how much he misses Harry.  No, it's the little things that give us a glimpse into what he's feeling...

     

Title: Chapter 9 05 Aug 2009 2:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this was definitely worth the wait. So sweet. I love how both Harry and Snape were missing each other, but both were trying to be strong.

    I just love those twins, they never fail to crack me up. I'm so so looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Such kind words, thank you!

    Glad you liked the twins.  They have such a distinctive "voice". . .I was worried I wouldn't even hit the right note. . .

Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: hp4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gotta love the Weasleys. Molly and Arthur are great parents and it shows in the way they were both able to help and comfort Harry throughout his stay.

    It's so wonderful to see how much Harry and Snape were missing each other and their reunion was perfect the next morning.

    Your story is fantastic and is always worth the wait.

    Author's Response:

    They are good parents, and I wanted that to show.  But I also wanted them to be different than Snape, to be another mental adjustment for Harry.

    Glad you liked the reunion.  I didn't want to over do it.  It was just one night, after all.

Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 5:57 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Yey!! I like!!! Good chappie. I like the talk between Harry and Mr. Weasley. Your Mr. Weasley seems like such a great guy. Much fun.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I don't think there's any way to make Arthur Weasley anything *but* a good guy, though...

    Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! You do a terrific job of expressing burgeoning love and vulnerability. Both Harry's and Severus'.

    Author's Response: Thank you, that means so much since that is really the ultimate heart of the story.
Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 3:43 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful, beautiful chapter, lyra. I loved it. The scene with Harry and Mr. Weasley and the marshmallows was incredibly heart-warming, and I don't think I've ever read a scene like that in fan fiction. It was absolutely lovely. Thank you for such a wonderful chapter :-)

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks!  That scene seems to be getting a lot of positive feedback, which amuses me somewhat (for reasons that I'll disclose when I eventually finish the fic and do the commentary...).

    Anyway, I'm pleased you liked it so much, and appreciate the review!

Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 3:06 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, poor adorable Harry. And very lovely last line. A coincidence, indeed. We're not buying it. :oP I really enjoyed both Molly and Arthur in this chapter. And it was cute to see Severus so distracted by Harry being gone. :o)

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad you liked the Weasleys.  They were rather difficult to pin down, mostly because I'm so used to writing Severus and Harry that my brain kind of hits a bit of a wall with other characters.

    Thanks for reviewing, as always ;)

Title: Chapter 9 04 Aug 2009 12:55 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww a nice mix of Harry having a good time and missing Severus, lovely lol I loved the 'hug' at the end too, I always look forward to updates of this story and am glad that you found some time :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

    (I liked the "hug" too.)


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