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Reviews For Filling the Void
Title: Chapter 6 30 Jan 2009 8:46 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey...i just completed reading both reading the signs and filling the void...you have done an amazing job... all i request is don't leave the story midway...its far too interesting to leave it there....particularly about this chapter...its wonderful when harry calls him daddy there...it shows just how much comfort he needs...continue the good work waiting for the next chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you liked it.  No worries, I have no plans to abandon the story.
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jan 2009 10:33 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe sequel.

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 7:01 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww wow that was amazing! its so cute when Harry calls Sev Daddy :)

    Author's Response: Heh, thanks.  I think it's cute too.  I suspect that Harry and Severus find it both pleasing and embarrassing, however.
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 5:34 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, severus is being really understanding to harrys needs (looks in her crystal ball) i see a shopping spree coming up and a visit to the dursleys

    Author's Response: One of your guesses is correct.  I won't say which one though ;D  Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A fantastic chapter, lyra :-) You really know how to write angst without turning the story into a sob-mop. I love how Snape mentioned Harry being too bright to be fooled by a disguised baby moniter, but aware that the color purple would please Harry regardless. That was adorable. Also, Harry's reaction to Snape seeing his underwear was very realistic. The defensiveness was spot-on.

    Thanks for such a great update.

    (Oops, just realized I haven't logged in yet...LOL)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Jade!  I'm glad it didn't seem to soppy.  I'm finding it hard to lay off the angst, there's so many little experiences for Harry that I expect to throw him off kilter, but I don't want to wear my readers out.

    Anyhow, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.  Thanks for noticing the little details (like the purple speaker!).  I like to see who picks those out.

    Cheers.

Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 6:30 am
Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter...can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll do my best to update soon!
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 4:26 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your chapters are so heartbreakingly sweet that this one made me tearful:) Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2009 2:26 am
Reviewer: Stump_Pan (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story and I'm so glad to see that you've updated. This was a really great chapter. I love the interaction between Harry and Snape, it's so real. I love the fact that you're showing that it take time to heal the damage abuse leaves behind. So many stories fail to get it right, either healing it too quickly, or not showing how deep things really go. Again, great job and I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you -- I'm relieved you like the pace.  I tend to worry that I'm taking things too slowly, actually.  It's a tough balance to find.

Title: Chapter 6 26 Jan 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Saffronfrog (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That last section really choked me up! It's easy to get frustrated with Harry's anger at Snape trying to help him - but then to be reminded of how vulnerable Harry is, leaves me breathless with pity. I understand you have a life (and I hope it is a happy and full one!) but I hope you find the time to update soon - I had to re-read the whole story because I'd forgotten what had happened. Great work Lyra, thank you for the wonderful story.

    Author's Response:

    I wanted to show Harry's defenses going up -- hence the anger.  Like Snape told Dumbledore, "it's not all rainbows and butterflies."  While Harry is starting to trust Snape more, he prefers to receive help without actually having to reveal how/why he needs it.  He wants Snape to be a mind reader.  Thus, the questions irritate and anger him.

    Thanks for the review!  I'll do my best to update as soon as I can.

Title: Chapter 6 26 Jan 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    can't wait for more. Love how Harry gets embarrassed by the thought of snape seeing his under garmets

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry does have some delicate sensabilities, lol.  Thanks for the review.


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