Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 2:07 am
Reviewer: oodlesofmzness (Signed) [Report This]
    So good....thank you!

    Author's Response: You're very welcome!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: pannymoomins (Signed) [Report This]
    yay!!! the next part! i love it, its caught my interest already, i cant wait to read what happens next!!! xx

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so thrilled that there's a continuation of this series *beams* Great chapter - I really like the way Severus made sure that Harry's room was all his, nothing secondhand.

    Author's Response: Snape realized that would be a big deal for Harry, if somewhat unconsciously.  I'm glad he did it that way too!  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2008 12:51 am
Reviewer: jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! He never apologized or explained why he was late. Perhaps Snape should leave his door open with Harry being allowed to sleep on the couch in Snapes room. That way Snape could get some slep too!

    Author's Response: That's one idea I had considered, actually -- the sleeping in Snape's room thing.  But then I thought it might be a little too "soft" of a reaction from Severus.
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 11:52 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I love the way you write. I like your Harry -- he's young but not too babyish even with his problems and I really like your Severus. Even though this was an angsty chapter, I still chuckled throughout as I read. I especially liked the tour of the house (cellar, check, potions lab which you will not enter upon . . . .) and Harry's thinking "like I would ever enter a potions lab during the summer". I could just visualize the two of them touring the house.

    Thanks so much for writing this sequel!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the compliments.  Harry's personality is tough to write because he is very much walking an emotional tightrope between acting his age and regressing.  I suspect he'll be going back and forth quite a bit in this story.

    I love hearing about the bits people think are funny, because I never actually try to be so it's a nice bonus to receive!

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Angels Broken Shadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is lovely! Fantastic setup to what is already promising to be just as good as Reading The Signs.

    I liked Harry thinking the things in his room all belonged to Luka. That just says so much about his mental state. I also love this idea of him camping outside Severus's room. I can't wait to see where this is going!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  The first chapter is always so difficult to write, although made somewhat easier this time around because of all the background in RTS.  The camping outside Severus' room was the very first thought I had about this sequel, so I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see the first chapter of your sequel, lyra!! And you did a fabulous job, I must say. Snape is very calm and collected in this series, and I could see that side of him developing if given the chance--very believable.

    It'll be interesting to see how Snape and Harry continue to interact throughout the sequel. I can't wait to read more!

    A brilliant start!

    Author's Response:

    I discovered rather early in life that if something is wrong and everyone is panicing, One person always manages to remain calm and collected.  Someone has to right?  Severus has always struck me as that person -- incredibly hard to rattle.  And while Harry seems to throw him off-kilter more easily than anyone or anything else, he still needs to be the steady rock in this arena.  For Harry.

    Thank for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad to see this! I was just thinking about 'Reading the Signs' the other day, and wondering if you were going to go ahead with the sequel.

    Poor little Harry...he's still so incsecure. I wonder if it some of it is because they're away from Hogwarts, in a home environment, and in the back of his mind Harry isn't sure what to expect from Severus here.

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    A very astute review!  You've managed to capture Harry's state of mind freakishly (heh) well.  He is very insecure still, and Severus, perhaps foolishly, wasn't expecting that.

    He has a lot to learn.

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Squeal!!! I have been crossing my fingers that you would continue your story and here it is! You have a wonderful style - very easy to read. The storyline has got me gripped already, I wonder what is going on in Harry's head. Hmm, whatever it is, I am sure Severus is the man to get to the bottom of it! Great job.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it!  And you're right, Severus will get to the bottom of the issue -- hopefully without pulling his hair out ;)
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:44 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start to this sequel. It gives us a great feel for the fact that, yes, Severus is now Harry's father, but that doesn't mean that all of Harry's issues were automatically solved.

    This little glitch cracked me up: "textile exploration" I think you meant "tactile" which means sense of touch rather than fabric. But maybe Harry wanted to touch just the drapes and bedspread? ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha I totally meant 'tactile' and must have had a weird little mind hiccough.  Thanks for pointing that out.

    You've hit the nail on the head -- they've started something, but Harry isn't "fixed" all of sudden.  And Severus is about to find out just how many issues the boy has.


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