| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 19 Jul 2008 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: osiris33 (Anonymous)
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great story, hope you continiu fast, i realy liked it so far
| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 19 Jul 2008 11:30 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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not very good
Author's Response: I'm certainly sorry you feel that way. Perhaps you would care to include some constructive criticism?
It is not a risk I'm willig to take.
Can't wait for an update~~!
| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 19 Jul 2008 9:48 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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Please post ASAP! This story is great!!!! Don't cure meeeeeeee!
insteadofa jelly legsjinx can i have a PB&J Sanwiche.
| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 19 Jul 2008 6:22 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Lol, nice End Note, (grin) I like this, It makes an intersting start for a story! Please update soon? i will be waiting eagerly for more.
Fantastic, hurry up with more!
your writing is very compelling. the reactions were on the mark. i love stories that begin this way. can't wait for the next chapter.
| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 19 Jul 2008 3:43 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Making Harry pick his own switch and giving him the spanking of his life was really a well earned punishment but the child also needs love and understanding. His godfather just died and not only Harry knows he was innocent but Harry had hoped that Sirius would have taken him away from the Dursleys with Sirius' death Harry's hope of a normal life has also died. Hopefully Sev can fill the void
Author's Response: I agree, but for Snape to fill the void, he has to overcome his own issues. Snape engages in behavior that could be described as emotionally (well, verbally) abusive-- for someone who's been abused, the struggle not to become one's mother/father can be daunting.
That's not a risk I want to take: I'll review! Great chapter here; I really like the way you depicted Harry's reaction when Snape attempted to cuddle him, of course he'd be unused to that.
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