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Title: Conflicts and mysteries 06 Jul 2023 3:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m glad that Severus is digging deeper. I reviewed solely to avoid the dragon pox.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 30 Jun 2009 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *rolls eyes* A Pox on pox. Great story, but I'm on a time limit right now. Excuse me *dashes off to read more*
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 31 Jul 2008 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was short. Too short. I love the way your story reads. I don't know why for sure, lol. I can just look at it and it 'looks' like a good story. And so far, it is one. The characters are great and the angst/drama is wonderful. You are doing wonderful!
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 21 Jul 2008 6:11 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you are developing Severus as a complex characterin this story. So many writer's keep him the flat, 2-dimensional "evil git of the dungeons" who behaves nastily for nastiness' sake. But you have avoided this beautifully. His reactions to Harry's behavior quietly tell the reader that there are reasons for hte way Severus has developed his public persona. And that he's seeing things about Harry's ife that he never expected to see--things that Severus has unfortunately, had personal experience with. You can see him adding everything up and not liking the answer he is coming up with.

    Dumbledore had better watch out, I think.

    Bravo!
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 21 Jul 2008 2:52 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    More, more, more please!!! I really like your stile of writing and the plot is interesting. Oh, did I mention that your story is the right mix of absolutely cute, thrilling and well... ingenious? Okay, now I did. ^^
    In hope for a nice new chap in the near future, your Melfis.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 21 Jul 2008 2:14 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 21 Jul 2008 12:21 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! What's are the bracelets of fate? Are they the lines made when you bend your wrist back?
    Is Snape going to argue with Dumbledore or ask for his help? I'll carry on reading...(: (Also, I'm certain there were *3* chapters to this story yesterday...weird).

    Author's Response:

    You're right on about the bracelets. As to Dumbledore, you'll see :>)

    There were three chapters posted, but only because I posted Chapter two twice. Oops!

Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 8:44 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I like the semi-sentimental side of Snape. and I don't want to get dragon pox.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely--please keep going!
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 8:07 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks Sooo much for the update,it is another great chapter,I really like the way this is going.

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