Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 6:27 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! I just deleted the extra chapter, and transferred the reviews to the second one. Sorry about that, I was rushing when I accepted them so I just glanced through chapter 2. I wasn't going to validate chapter 3 at the time, but I told myself that I shouldn't take away the right of authors to decide when to post their own chapters (even though it's a bad idea for reviews because people tend to keep reading until there are no more chapters, and THEN review), so I just validated it too.

    Please be aware that unvalidated authors add chapters to the archive, but the chapters are not viewable to people visiting the site until they are validated. So if you add something, it's there unless you delete it, even if it doesn't show up on the most recent. I cannot make you a validated author until your text formating matches the formatting of the site, at least having double line breaks between paragraphs.

    Author's Response:

    I'd like to take this oppotunity to apologize to my readers, and also the mod, for my mistake. I got a little hasty and made a number of stupid errors. I am trying to correct the formatting problems, and will hopefully have the whole thing in hand soon.

     As for the updates, I am able to update pretty regularly now because school is out. College starts again at the end of August, and it's likely to dry up a bit, between being with my boyfriend, my friends, and oh yeah, occaisonally shuffling my lazy behind to classes :).

     Thank you to every one who took the time to review. I really value that, plus it gives me more incentive to write.

Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 6:13 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending!! I also loved how the fireplace swallowed Snape when he went through the floo- very descriptive. Good job!
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 6:08 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you double posted chapter 2.

    And here I thought you had posted something new.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 5:39 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good so far, hehe you posted the same chapter twice.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 3:53 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey great chapter really loved it. It'll be intresting to see the conversation that Severus and Dumbledore have. I love the banter and arguing that is going on between Harry and Severus. I don't know why it's just really cute. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Oh and just an FYI I think you accidentally posted chapter 2 twice.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This has been very engaging and since I don't want Dragon pox, I thought I'd tell you that I'd like to read another chapter soon:) Soothing Syrup sounds nice right about now. I think Harry needed the rest and Snape needed some answers. Will he get them soon? I can't wait to find out!

    Author's Response: Soothing Syrup was actually a real thing-- Victorian parents dosed their children with Mrs. Winslow's Soothing Syrup ( mainly gin and sugar) to quiet them.  I could do with either version right about now ;)
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 3:04 am
Reviewer: hpmara727@yahoo.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An interesting story so far, however the posted chapters of 2 & 3 are the same.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 12:58 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter - seeing Dumbledore questioned by Snape is bound to be interesting. You seem to have posted it twice, so you might want to fix that.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 12:57 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I was crushed when i discovered the third chapter was actually a repeat. Mite want to delete that. But again Great Work.
Title: Conflicts and mysteries 20 Jul 2008 12:37 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, This is really good! (Although I always get confused between what the Dursley's are supposed to have done to Harry). Just one thing - you would say 'dragged' rather than 'drug'. It took me a while to figure out what was different. (:

    Author's Response: My idea is that the Dursleys would not be the sort of people who would beat a child ( though there are several excellent stories that deal with that very thing; I recommend "Whelp", by jharad). Their behavior seems more consistent with emotional abuse, which is essentially using words and emotions to hurt someone by undermining their sense of self. Children are especially vulnerable to this, because they tend to believe what others (especially those who care for them) tell them. This can cause people real pyschic harm-my fic is dedicated to exploring  how this scenerio could play out.

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