| Title: Waltz of Treachery
| 24 Jul 2008 6:50 am
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| Reviewer: Raven Knight (Anonymous)
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There are several spelling and grammatical errors in your writing, but they can be mostly and easily overlooked. Just wanted to throw that out there. It is an interesting way that you are choosing to approach the whole Snape-adopts-Harry plotline here, particularly with the addition of an Unbreakable Vow. (I'm assuming that's what kind of vow it is, considering it is under pain of death should Severus not fulfill this vow of his.) Interesting touch. And that you have decided to have not only Dumbledore but McGongall involved in this whole situation is a potentially interesting and complication-causing (maybe?) for the future chapters of this. Also, the Leprechaun Gold thing with the Dursleys was amusing.
And the Les Miserables homage was lovely. Very, very much like Valjean buying Cosette from the Thenardiers. I also am quite a fan of that show. THe interactions were very much of the greedy Thenardiers. And I knew what type of manuever was coming just from reading the title of the chapter. Well done homage to a great show.
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