I wish Severus could see that Harry’s reflex to pull away was borne out of fear. Werewolves officially repelled.
| Title: Tension
| 05 Jan 2009 7:46 am
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| Reviewer: Kiwi (Anonymous)
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I am simply loving your story
taking me out of my pathetic life and into another's
Its almost as fun as reading the books
(so i would gladly set a rabid unicorn on you if you stop writing)
I usually review when i am done reading...
But your end of chapter note got me...
I love werewolves and do not wish to repel them
so I hope your lieing
*sniff*
Anyway! Good Job!!! Your amazing thanks for taking me out of my boring pathetic life!!!
Lol, poor Harry. He deserved I guess, not all adults are like the Dursleys. It should be kind of obviousthat they don't work the same way. Now he's sitting on a stool. I wonder how bored he'll get. Snape could have put him in a corner, I wonder which would have been worse. Your way Harry hast to sit on his sore rear but it get's very boring standing in a corner. And It's embarresing. I'll shut up now. I enjoyed this chapter!
| Title: Tension
| 29 Jul 2008 6:30 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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Ok Velveeta lol
I like this story. Actually I kind of like this End note. I was so scared that Harry was going to get spanked with the switch again and I thought it was cool that Snape threw it into the fire. Good job so far
Definitely required then! (;
Thought the part where Snape threw the cane in the fire was good. I love Snape's patience.
"I would have last night was enough, but evidently not.” thought last night?
Good tension here. Poor Harry, they are both such strong characters, but I don't know who will win. Harry might be very patient, and Snape might be very impatient. I suppose it depends and it will be interesting to see who will win. :)
| Title: Tension
| 26 Jul 2008 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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... soon WHAT will come? ...
I want to see a werewolf, but I'll review anyway. This is great!!!!!
that was a very well written chapter and harry certainly needs someone like snape to teach him some discipline and to have respect for himself and others.
throws a death eater to the werewolf
i love a defiant harry! great chapter hope to see more soon
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