Potions and Snitches
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Title: Testing boundries 08 Aug 2008 7:06 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry,(he really should keep a close eye on his sense of self preservation)and your writing keeps getting better and better,thaks for the update.
Title: Testing boundries 08 Aug 2008 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    You're writing Snape as Snape. He's not father-of-the-year by any means, and I think a vast majority of readers forget this. He'll make mistakes, and he'll be unreasonable. Keep writing. You're doing a fine job with this story.
Title: Testing boundries 08 Aug 2008 3:51 pm
Reviewer: Icepick (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's a well written story, but Snape is being ridiculous. Somewhere along the line, when you have teenagers, you have to let them *communicate* with you. I'll grant that Harry's comment to Snape was disrespectful (we'll look past the fact that Snape deserves it ten-fold for how he has treated Harry is the past) but how about making it clear it's not an option, and then discussing why Harry feels that way...so they could actually try to work through it? All relationships, even parenting, need to have communication at their core.

    Author's Response:

    "...but how about making it clear it's not an option, and then discussing why Harry feels that way...so they could actually try to work through it?"

    I see what you're saying, but is it consistent with Snape? He's never struck me as a 'talk about feelings type'. He's very much a man of action, though often, I would think, subtle, covert action.

     

Title: Testing boundries 08 Aug 2008 3:05 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Do I make the flourish and blotts cut? Yay!! good chapter, though I feel like Snape was a bit harsh.. Well... not for standing on the chair, certainly, but for the disrespect thing. He shouldn't have mentioned that as part of the punishment, standing in the corner should have been enough for that... Just my opinion. update soon!
Title: Testing boundries 08 Aug 2008 12:33 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh poor harry, he just diesnt think does he? i loved his comment that earned him the spanking, it is so true to a child!

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