| Title: Further Consequences
| 11 Aug 2008 5:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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This was a very good chapter. I'm glad Snape is taking good care of Harry. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Further Consequences
| 11 Aug 2008 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Very interesting chapter. I like the character development. It's amusing, and yet makes me rather nervous to read Harry's observations on Snape. And I am very interested to know just how much Snape is going to tell Harry about the Dark Mark.
I like the way you're dealing with Harry's issues with self-harm, mostly because Snape's reactions are realistic. He doesn't know how to deal with it, so he becomes angry. I'm glad he recognized that he frightened Harry. I like the way you write his discomfort and Harry's uncertainty. Well done.
Blasted Blast End Skrewt - they will get up every time.
Excellent chapter - I always wondered why the teachers and staff didn't realize that it is abnormal for a child to take the type of injuries he got and not cry or at least, seek help.
I was raised as a tomboy and thought it weakness to cry over any little thing - but with something big, I went to my parents - (not crying,mind, but seeking help)
This next conversation should be interesting.
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