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Reviews For The Punishment Should Fit the Crime
I lol'd. Best line ever
I'm curious about Snape's comment that he left Voldemort after the Potter's deaths. We know that he actually began to spy for Dumbledore well before their deaths, probably the late autumn or early winter (bare trees and dead leaves swirly all about when he first went to Dumbledore). So is this aspect of the story AU, or is Snape just telling Harry the story a bit differently because he doesn't want to fill him in on the complete facts?
The word "prone" refers to lying on one's stomach, like someone shooting a rifle (that's how I remember the difference). I like Hedwig's assessment of Severus. Are you ever planning on depicting more openly what Tobias' drawings were, or are you deliberately going to keep it vague? Author's Response: I plan on expanding the 'Tobias-Elaine' storyline, but I want to keep details of certain things vague, primarily because the story has some disturbing themes and this is an open archive-- I wouldn't want to unduly disturb someone who wasn't clear on what s/he'd signed up for.
Author's Response: I intend on addressing this more fully in later chapters--expect it to hopefully explain a lot about some of Snape's pathology.
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