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Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 26 Jan 2009 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Asterix Tutnix (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I had already been looking forward to it! But cruel: cruel of you to stop here (!) and cruel of Snape to ask Harry such a question! If I were Harry, I would answer that I would consider falling down a cliff, being sure of one's death and getting injured punishment enough! However, I somehow doubt that Snape would agree... poor Harry! Please update as soon as you can!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, but Snape has never dealt with this kind of issue before. I agree it's ill advised--but he's making an effort not to turn into Tobias.

    And he was actually sort of good about helping Harry with the nightmare. So I'd give him a B+, all things considered.

Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 26 Jan 2009 9:17 am
Reviewer: RoseRose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! This is one of the best Snape as guardian stories I've read, because you capture the essence of both characters at this point in the series. Keep on writing!
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 26 Jan 2009 7:10 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    The ban on flying carpets is totally ridiculous! How can a wizard by expected to fly with his family on a broomstick?

    Please, please, please update soon! I love this story!!

    Author's Response:

    A combination of careful balance and toddler stacking. Or you can do what I did and buy a slightly used Thestral. It's invisble, but well, can't have it all...

     

Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 9:28 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    glad you are finishing the story!!!!!

    Hate how you left this chapter on a clift hanger though :(
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Marylou (Signed) [Report This]
    I must say, great story, I like it very much. Thank you for sharing, and please update soon, nearly can`t wait. Marylou
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 11:35 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Harry thinking that he was partly in trouble for having a nightmare, he is so cute lol! I wonder if he will come up with a suitable punishment for himself! : )
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 6:18 am
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapters. I hope you update really soon. I even gave you a ten to encourage you.
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 5:45 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter!

    BTW: (he conjured a vial of dreamless sleep) Shouldn't that be "summoned a vial"? Potions can't be conjured. Severus would know that.

    Author's Response: Mea Culpa :) I left my self correcting quill in my other robe's pocket
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Snape is understanding Harry better.
Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath 25 Jan 2009 3:31 am
Reviewer: Chelsea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    snape is actually taking harry's input?..can't believe it...can't wait for the next chapter!

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