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Reviews For The Punishment Should Fit the Crime
Was that snake planning this? Hmmm...! Too funny Snape making him read that book! I'm looking forward to your next update!
poor old harry can't stay out of trouble for long, he goes and kicks a rock and falls off
The word "prone" refers to lying on one's stomach, like someone shooting a rifle (that's how I remember the difference). I like Hedwig's assessment of Severus. Are you ever planning on depicting more openly what Tobias' drawings were, or are you deliberately going to keep it vague? Author's Response: I plan on expanding the 'Tobias-Elaine' storyline, but I want to keep details of certain things vague, primarily because the story has some disturbing themes and this is an open archive-- I wouldn't want to unduly disturb someone who wasn't clear on what s/he'd signed up for.
Author's Response: I intend on addressing this more fully in later chapters--expect it to hopefully explain a lot about some of Snape's pathology. |
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