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Reviews For Shadowland
Title: Detention's Escape 08 May 2022 3:39 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting plot premise! I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Title: Detention's Escape 26 Feb 2014 12:39 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A great start to the story thank you
Title: Detention's Escape 13 Aug 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting start.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 06 Aug 2008 7:49 am
Reviewer: EBWelsh (Signed) [Report This]
    *smugs. you've got me to post my first review on this site. i'm really glad you posted Shadowland up here. hope i wasnt being a drag on hpff when I suggested that you do. oh, this is malikali from hpff by the way. good luck with your story on this site!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  And thanks for suggesting it!  Your reviews are appreciated as always!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 9:14 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Detention still may be waiting for him. You have me wondering where and when they are.

    Author's Response:

    Heh, yeah, that comes into play soon.  Glad I have you wondering... I like to pull people in by getting them thinking on things.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 9:10 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooohh you're an evil genius! Harry and Snape stuck somewhere together, (cackles) it's brilliant. The summary sounded kind of sci-fi, lol. Good first chapter, it would have been funny if Harry shouted at Cho. I would have liked to seen her expression if he had.

    Author's Response:

    Responded to other review.

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooohh you're an evil genius! Harry and Snape stuck somewhere together, (cackles) it's brilliant. The summary sounded kind of sci-fi, lol. Good first chapter, it would have been funny if Harry shouted at Cho. I would have liked to seen her expression if he had.

    Author's Response:

    The first few chapters are kind of sci-fi-ish I guess but hopefully readers don't see the rest of the story that way.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 5:48 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    very intresting beginning. Keep writing, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww man, I got so excited when I saw the next button, but then the next page just said "by" and that was it. This story is really interesting, just watch the spellings of the characters, such as "Myrtl" you just forgot the 'e'. And, though I would check to make sure, as I'm not entirely positive, that "Collin" might be 'Colin.' Anyways, definitely interesting and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    More should be coming!  The site admins said they will post one new chapter a day (but as of now the story is complete).  Sorry about the odd spellings.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008 10:07 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting, does Snape have any emergency supplies (potions etc) with him, what about food and stuff...looking forward to more

    Author's Response:

    No emergency supplies, because I can't see him carrying stuff like that around the castle every day with him, but the food issue is taken care of in later chapters.

    Thanks!

    -JW.


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