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Reviews For Shadowland
Title: Snake and Dragon 10 Aug 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! Poor Draco!

    Harry and him have alot in common. Maybe they BOTH need Snape to be their parental figure!

    Excellent chapter!! Yet again; you have left me on the edge of my seat...again!

    Author's Response:

    Heh, just wait until the sequel and you'll be happy with the Draco situation.

    Thanks!  Glad to know I can keep readers excited about the story!

    -JW.

Title: Will by Force 09 Aug 2008 7:36 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for several chapters at once!!

    The story is very interesting. I like how the relationship between Harry and Snape is coming along. This is nicely different than the usual "Harry has been so abused by the Dursleys that Snape loves him".

    Author's Response:

    Thank the site admins for the several chapters at once!

    Glad you're enjoying the story!  Thanks for the review!

    -JW.

Title: Will by Force 09 Aug 2008 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying your story so much, I don't want it to end.

    I love how Snape conjured up a bed for Harry. I think that Harry is not the only one who is starting to view their relationship as more than a student and teacher; I think that Snape is starting to feel paternal towards Harry.

    Author's Response:

    I thought it was important to show that Harry trusted Snape enough to sleep in his office.

    Thanks for reviewing!  Glad you're enjoying the story!

    -JW.

Title: Whispers in the Dark 09 Aug 2008 9:51 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry it's been taking so long. I've been having to fix the formatting on each chapter before I post it, and find where to put the scene breaks, and I've been having a lot going on. I tried to add one every couple of hours but I haven't been home enough to get it all. I have been doing chapter by chapter, trying to wait and give enough time for you to get reviews before I post the next one too, and I wanted to make sure that there would still be chapters being posted after the Weekend update so that you would get double the attention and reviews from that. If you post a whole story all at once, you tend to only get the reviews for the last chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for doing all of that for me, it's appreciated.  I'm not sure how the formatting was wrong for the chapters... I'm used to posting on HPFF where it's fine so long as there is a break between each paragraph.  I do appreciate what you've done though.  Thank you much.

    -JW.

Title: Draco Determined 08 Aug 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update soon. This is great.

    Author's Response:

    I would but it's all submitted and completed.  You'll have to ask the site admins to update.  I've asked them to post five chapters a day until it's all posted but they either ignored the request or decided not to.

     Thanks for your review!  Glad you're enjoying the story!

    -JW.

Title: Draco Determined 08 Aug 2008 4:51 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. I like the very slowly developing relationship between Snape and Harry. Their conversation was very interesting. I'm assuming that Snape put the words into McGonagall's mouth "our resident hero", and doesn't even realize that Harry was hurt by them.

    I'm a little surprised that the adults are not more concerned about finding out who caused the damage to Harry's stuff.

    Author's Response:

    Unfortunately there's really no way they can find out who did it aside from ask around, which they did.  Glad you're enjoying the story!

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Draco Determined 08 Aug 2008 3:33 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i hope draco gets in trouble. why is harry trying to protect him? that's just stupid. (not your writing that's stupid, i'm sure there's a reason for it and it will be properly explained...) you're chapters (apparently i missed the last three updates, though how I don't know) were wonderful. i guess i don't have to tell you to update soon, you're good about that... :)

    Author's Response:

    The story is complete and is all submitted to the site admins.  It is they who post a new chapter every day even though I have asked them to just post the whole thing or post five chapters a day until it's all finished.

     Glad you're liking the story!

    -JW.

Title: Grading Pains 08 Aug 2008 1:37 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is really an interesting story.

    However, I am as confused as Harry as to what emotions he's feeling at the end and why.

    Author's Response:

    Hm, sorry about the confusion.  I hope this will be cleared up for you in later chapters.

    Thanks for your review!

    -JW.

Title: Grading Pains 08 Aug 2008 1:25 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry! Malfoy is such a prat!

    I hope that Harry doesn't get beat up by Malfoy and his goons!

    I really like seeing the gradual trust that Snape is gaininig in Harry. Nice job as usual; can't wait for them to post the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  No worries about Harry... he is well protected and can handle himself.  I'm glad I was able to show the slowly developing relationship between the two... I hate reading stories where authors rush things like that and make the story too unbelievable.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: The Tutor 07 Aug 2008 7:49 pm
Reviewer: vanessa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like h story so far. Good that you don´t make harry look completely braindead. please update quickly

    Author's Response:

    It's all written and just waiting for the site admins to post it.

    Thanks for your review!

    -JW.


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