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Reviews For Shadowland
Title: The Tutor 07 Aug 2008 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry he always tries to please his friends in this case Hermione, but the girl has to learn, she has to be able to handle competition, she will have a hard life later on if she can’t handle the fact that there are others who may be better than her in certain areas. I know someone like her and the first time she “failed” (got something less than an A) she had to get psychiatric help as she almost went crazy. If Harry continues like this he may actually become stressed out and collapse and as a true friend she should realise the pressure she is putting on him just to make her feel better. Maybe it may be good if someone like Sev or McGonagall talk to the girl.

    Author's Response:

    I knew somebody like that too... she always got A's and then one time she got a B and freaked out.  I thought it was important to show that Hermione has some weaknesses.

    Thanks for your review!

    -JW.

Title: Offerings of Confusion 07 Aug 2008 4:48 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I'm wondering why Harry can remember all of these things, yet did not do well in potions. Yea, I know Snape was not easy to work around, but Harry was not outstanding in any class except defense.

    It will be interesting to see how this goes.

    Author's Response:

    I never got the impression that Harry wasn't doing well in classes except for when Snape was doing something to lower Harry's grades on purpose.

    Thanks for your review!

    -JW.

Title: Offerings of Confusion 07 Aug 2008 2:14 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i heart snape forevermore

    Author's Response:

    Lol.

    -JW.

Title: Offerings of Confusion 06 Aug 2008 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! I love it!!

    That's so funny!! Hopefully that'll shut Malfoy up!!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Offerings of Confusion 06 Aug 2008 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    This job could be considered a precursor to being a potions apprentice. I could understand why Professor Snape would not consider Hermione, as she is one who would only look at what is in the text and not pull from other areas...for instance in grading Harry noted an obscure use for a plant one that was note even on the grading ruberik or the assigned text but was most likely discussed in Herbology; Hermione would have most likely just followed the ruberik religiously and not pick up things like the students who were cheating. This would be the difference between those who do well academically like Hermione and those who have the intuition to become potions masters like Harry

    Author's Response:

    I never really thought about the Potions apprence position, but that's something good to considder when I get into writing other stories.

    Thanks for your review!  It's appreciated!

    -JW.

Title: In the Land of Shadows 06 Aug 2008 9:03 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for explanations! Lol, cool chapter, I liked seeing Ron and Hermione.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Over the Hill and Through the Woods... 06 Aug 2008 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! I feel like this was a cliff-hanger even though I have another chapter. Thank you for your fast updates! Lol, :)

    Author's Response:

    The story is complete, the site admins just aren't letting me post the whole thign at once.

    Thanks for the review!

    -JW.

Title: Lost Accusations 06 Aug 2008 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chjapter! I'm sorry abpout the double review in the last chapter, I don't know why it did that. Interesting story, and I did not mean there was anything wrong with sci-fi. I love it, :)

    Author's Response:

    No problem, and I didn't think you did.  Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Dark Detention 06 Aug 2008 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update soon! This is really good.

    Author's Response:

    If the site admins update it it is all submitted and complete on my part.  Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.

Title: Dark Detention 06 Aug 2008 12:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That is an interesting way for Harry to spend his detention! I just love Harry's comment at the end to Snape.

    I like the fact that the story is already finished and that we don't have to wait forever for updates.

    Author's Response:

    :) Yeah, I like posting completed stories, that way there is no wait time.  I don't always do that on HPFF (the other place I post) though.  Thanks for the review!

    -JW.


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