This is really good and I like it.
Peace!
CheyRain
HUZZAH! ^^
I can scarcely express how much I enjoyed this fic, but I am practically doing a happy dance (it's frightening; close your eyes).
Love the idea behind the Shadowland - very clever, having a magical dead zone. Wish I'd thought of it. I also immensely enjoyed the progression of Severus' and Harry's relationship and so many other things that my poor brain can't produce them all. I could look them up, but I can't skim read and retain anything to save my life and it's taken me several hours (stretched over the course of the day and half the night) to read this delightful tale.
My apologies for not leaving reviews throughout, though. I tried to, but I was at work and the scant internet reception I have at that particular location refused to work all day.
Anyhow, you are a most talented writer and this a particularly enjoyable tale. Well done!
I really liked this story. Good job Now on to the sequel. :)
| Title: Father of Mine
| 31 Jul 2009 11:28 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Very beautiful story. I loved the way you have portrayed every one and loved what you wrote about the higher power.
| Title: Father of Mine
| 25 May 2009 12:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Swell. This was good. A little..well.slow in the beginning. But I liked it none the less. I'll go check out that sequel now.
| Title: Firmer Foundations
| 25 May 2009 11:58 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Actually, I liked that bit. Oddly enough, that was canonical! That's an odd thought to something that is supposed to be AU :P.
| Title: State of Mind
| 25 May 2009 10:42 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Fluffy pillows, blankets and cats. That was a sweet ending! :)
Ooh brilliant! Going to look for it. Well done on writing such an amazing story - particularly with God slotted in!
Hi, Thought your ideas on the light and darkness - presence and absence etc were beautifully put! Thanks, tabbycat.
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