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Reviews For Shadowland
Title: Lost Accusations 13 Aug 2008 5:56 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter,very well written.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Detention's Escape 13 Aug 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting start.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 13 Aug 2008 8:35 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting and poignant story. I liked the typical guy way they got back together at the end. My only disappointment was that I thought the Shadowland and their new survival knowledge was under-used; it is such an interesting place with lots of possibilities, especially to trap DE who aren't use to not using magic. Hopefully we will see it in the sequel.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry about that.  Unfortunately it isn't seen in the sequel at all yet, and I'm not sure it will be because there are only five chapters left before it is complete.  Mostly the Shadowland was my way of throwing these two characters together to provide a base for a relationship, and it also proved useful as a way to save Severus in the end.  Sorry about the disappointment, but glad you liked the rest of the story.

    Thanks for your review!  I appreciate it when people take the time to let me know what they think!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 13 Aug 2008 3:10 am
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely loved this story!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 12 Aug 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful ending. I will be looking for the sequel.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 12 Aug 2008 7:52 pm
Reviewer: shiva87 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope to read the sequel soon.it was wonderful.
    I think you should update once or twice a week so more people will see your story and someone like me will have to wait and think about it during the week.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'll remember that.

     -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 12 Aug 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story. And I for one will be looking forward to the sequel!
    Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.

Title: Firmer Foundations 12 Aug 2008 4:04 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting talk.

    Somehow, I missed this chapter and read the last one first.

    It was a good conversation. At that time, a pat on the back may have been more welcome, but when Severus was on his feet, I doubt he would have sat long enough to listen.

    On Babylon 5, one of the characters said that faith and reason go together. Faith keeps us going when reason says we can't or it is impossible.

    Author's Response:

    Hm... that's interesting.

    Thanks for the review!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 12 Aug 2008 3:56 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Good ending! Harry can forgive - maybe he came to the realization that Severus was a little older than him when he made his horrible mistake and that it was Voldemort that killed his parents. Or maybe he decided that the man cared and he wanted Severus in his life.

    I am hoping that Draco make three - his life hasn't been great and he also needs a loving dad.

    Author's Response:

    :) Heh, just wait til' the sequel and we'll see tons more of Draco.  The Sequel is almost finished.  I'll begin posting it soon.

    Thanks for the review!

    -JW.

Title: Father of Mine 12 Aug 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for writing a very good story. I have enjoyed it and look forward to the sequel.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    -JW.


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