I loved how you handled Snape tracking down Harry in the halls. What will happen next?
| Title: Enemies
| 09 Aug 2008 3:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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This is great! :D Can't wait for an update! Your Snape is nice and Slytherin—and prejudiced against Harry. ::) Adds interest, though. Great job!
This story is looking really good! I really like the way you had the events play out, mayjor build-up. I feel so bad for Harry right now and the poor guy isn't out of this yet.
Please post again when you can!
yay. i was freaking that you were going to have snape strike him again or something equally asinine
I loved this chapter. Harry really is a pot waiting to overboil and you did it beautifully. Snape taking advantage whereever he can is also very Snape like. It's rare that people portray him with that particular quality, and it's a shame because he's not completely honorable. Good job!
well, that was a surprise, Severus actually apologized to Harry. Things are very tense between the two here. I like how Sev healed him, and the flashback scene was well done also. Can't wait to see what else Harry tells Severus.
I'm adding this to my fav's, by the way. :)
I'm really enjoying this story. For someone who keeps his emotions as repressed as Severus does, and is under so much pressure, I think it's very plausible that he'd strike Harry in a moment of anger. I look forward to chapter 3.
Olympics: GO AUSSIES!
| Title: Enemies
| 09 Aug 2008 3:31 am
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| Reviewer: maidenkay (Anonymous)
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YAY Canada. 9though I don't think the summer games is our strong point, well have to wait 2 more years) um...yeah, great story keep writing XD.
| Title: Enemies
| 09 Aug 2008 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
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