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Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very nice. You should consider writing a longer story based on this short piece. You have created the basis for a very original story. I for one, would love to see you expand on this story.

    Author's Response: I don't know if I could. But thannk you! =)
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 5:05 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    By the way, I forgot to mention in my review earlier, but you said "diluted" eyes twice when I imagine that you meant "dilated" eyes.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I did mean that ^^;; Thanks.  And as for the Oblivation... Honestly? I had completely forgotten about that.

Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely done. One small typo: "a pajamas".
    I would like to see more, it does work well as a long one-shot, but I hope you feel inclined to continue some of the issues.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    And that would be my Swedish coming through, sorry.

Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 4:00 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written. I could believe that from Lockhart - he stole so much else from people anyway. The only thing is that one wonders if he wouldn't have obliviated his victim. Excellent story.
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe nice! I actually wrote a one shot with the same plot. But i couldnt ever figure out how to begin it. My one shot that is. I really enjoyed your story =) Maybe i can finish my soon too!
Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 12:34 pm
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I never even noticed you never gave the name. Lockhart's speech, the blonde hair, defense against the dark arts, it was very clear. :P
    You kept Lockhart very in character, and even though I've never imagined him to be a child molester before, i can totally believe it now.

    It was a very creepy story, and hard to read for its content. But the relationship between Harry and Snape and how it develops in Harry's mind was extremely well written. The whole connection to the cupboards and what's safe and not was simply very good.

    Well done!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! ^^

    It was a very creepy story, and hard to read for its content -- I've read it far too many times by now, so rather than 'horrifying' it's been 'oh, god, not again'. You lose perspective when you work with the same text over and over and over. Which is why reviews like yours make me all smiley and happy! =)

     

     

Title: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008 9:41 am
Reviewer: cherrypi393 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nicely done

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