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Title: The Wards and Occlumency 11 Aug 2020 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good start to the story
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 07 Jan 2009 7:17 am
Reviewer: TrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I never know if I should toss my two cents in for a first chapter so late in the game but I wanted to let you know that I very much enjoyed it. I may not comment on every chapter. When I get going I will practically inhale a good story without pausing to eat let alone comment. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 28 Sep 2008 8:47 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. I really like this. I just stumbled across this under the recently updated stuff. This is really good, I must say. I love how Sever isn't as hard and crusty, but you still manage to make him be Severus. It's a very nice balance.

    Oh, and the underage drinking. I'm not for it at all, but the ends define the means...or something like that, so good job!!!

    Post again soon, k?
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 20 Sep 2008 10:57 am
Reviewer: june (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it so far!!

    Author's Response:

    glad you're liking it! enjoy next chapter

Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 10:29 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start!!!

    Author's Response: thanks...glad you're liking it.
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very nice chapter! I really hope that you'll write more and post it here)
    Looking forward to it)

    Author's Response: thanks! glad you're really enjoying this...have fun reading next chapter
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 2:27 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks like an interesting story. Too bad about Draco.

    Author's Response: I love Draco. He's one of my favorite characters of the Harry Potter world and think that if he had really had a choice he wouldn't have become a death eater...and maybe I just made him one so that I could portray that...but yeah I really don't like him being a death eater much...anyways thanks for reading and hope you enjoy next chapter
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. Need a bit of work on your sentence structure, but overall a very good premise. Keep at it. Continuous writing and reading really helps hone your skills.

    Author's Response: My english teacher nearly always puts that on my papers...sentence structure...anyway, thanks for reading and enjoy next chapter.
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice beginning. I'm guessing that Harry is what-fifteen, sixteen?

    I'm looking forward to your update, I'm very anxious to see Harry's reaction to Snape being his father. I think that is my favourite part in Severitus stories! That and when Snape finds out (when he doesn't know already).

    Author's Response:

    He's fifteen in the first chapter and is turning sixteen in chapter two...

    I love reading the reactions too! Anyways enjoy next chapter.

Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 9:32 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it so far. It's pretty well written and I love Tonks and the rest of the Order. Not sure about Snape yet, he seems to be softening pretty quickly, but maybe that's just because it's way too late for me to be up. In any case, it's an interesting story that I look forward to following.

    Author's Response: Snape is both a little hard on Harry and softening in the first chapter...but don't think he's OOC yet...he's that way for a reason. I hate when assumptions are made about a character as to how they act without knowledge of what happened before this character came into the scene...anyway thanks for the review. I love Tonks and the most members of the order...and enjoy next chapter

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