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Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 11 Aug 2020 2:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for you Harry should be involved, thank you
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 28 Sep 2008 9:01 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm.............interesting.....and awesome!!! Please continue!!!!!!
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: thanks for the review and glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 3:25 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting story. I didn't want to read a story about Snape not wanting Harry at all, but now, I can't seem to help reading to see if maybe he wants him just a little bit?

    Author's Response: This isn't a story about Snape not wanting Harry at all...if that was the impression you got from this, then I must make it clear that it is more about the growth between these two characters. in the summary I just put in a few parts of what I believe is chapter five or six...and really there is so much more to the story than the summary. Don't worry but Snape does want Harry...you'll see the meaning of the summary in later chapters...I have the entire plot in my head...enjoy the story and thanks for the review! 
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 3:00 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, although I noticed one typo--you said Snape "drowned a purple potion" it should be "downed". I'm glad Sev decided to include Harry in the discussion, he's old enough to learn what he's up against.

    I noticed that you mentioned you liked Draco, I have a story here that features him and Severus and Harry where Sev adopts Draco and he and Harry become brothers & Draco rejects being a DE. It's called Heir to Prince Manor, though Draco doesn't come until around chapter 8. If you want you can R&R it, thanks!

    Author's Response:

    ah, typos...I must have missed it...

    I've always felt that Dumbledore's overprotective nature kind of influenced how things turned out. If he had given Harry information about certain things a lot wouldn't have happened...so obviously Snape caught onto that...I mean had Dumbledore mentioned there was a prophecy what would have happened...would Harry have gone to the department of mysteries? No.

     ooo...a fanfic...I'll keep it in mind and attempt to read it soon...I might have seen it around actually...and I do think I have seen you in particular around so as soon as I get some free time I shall find your fic and read it...

    thanks for the review and glad you're liking it

Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: ITrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this.
    Just two chapters and I am already hooked.
    Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Hooking people in...very cool. I'm glad you're enjoying my little ficcy here...and thanks for the review...
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 2:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I love how you made us feel Harry's grief at Sirius' death; I fought back the tears myself when Harry cried!

    Very nice; I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response:

    I did that, really?

    lol

     I never feel like my writing can do that...I don't know but I def. know what you mean having read amazing fics like that...

    Is it bad I'm glad I could make you cry? Lol...no...but I am flattered by having so much power...-insert evil laugh here- anyhow I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and just thanks for the review...


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