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Reviews For Atoning The Past
Title: Changes 11 Aug 2020 3:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a wonderful chapter
Title: Changes 19 Oct 2008 12:36 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well that certainly puts a different spin on things. I like the fact that Remus is teaching again.

    Author's Response: Remus is one of my favorite characters so I have to have him around.
Title: Changes 13 Oct 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: Slythami (Signed) [Report This]
    It would make my week too- hahah- only in name ... right. Good chapter, update soon!

    Author's Response:

    yeah...I think watching Snape make breakfast would make anyone's week...especially if it was a good breakfast...I should have had some this morning, but I sort of woke up late and didn't have time to...meh...

    anyhow, thanks for the review...glad you're liking it.

Title: Changes 11 Oct 2008 7:18 am
Reviewer: aloveablegimp (Signed) [Report This]
    How cute! Snape is getting parental even with that heartbreaking monologue! It truly almost broke my heart I am getting overtly attached to your story. Please update soon and tell me it will end happily.

    Author's Response:

    I do that so much...get overly attached to stories that is...and yes Snape is going a little parental...just a little bit...lol...but it's one thing for him to act slightly parental and another for him to accept that he is in fact acting like a father and that he is a parent.

    thanks for your review. Glad you're enjoying the story so much.

    I don't know yet about how it will end so I can't really tell you...I don't know myself...lol..

    I shall update next weekend so it isn't that long a wait and I have tons ready so...I shall post...

     

Title: Changes 11 Oct 2008 7:18 am
Reviewer: RJL (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are a fantastic writer. I wish severitus' were my thing, but even if they aren't you're still a great writer. The only thing I noticed is that you said Harry was a baby in the year 1996, when he was born in 1980. Is this a mistake or am I missing something?
    Anyways, keep writing because you're really talented.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I really am not that great a writer...I wasn't a big fan of severitus myself until quite recently...and then after I finished one of my other fics...a Severus/Hermione marriage law I was sort of looking for something else to write and this sort of came to mind and now I love it...lol...

    As to the 1996 thing...I said that was the date because Harry was dreaming...so the dream happened in 1996 but he was dreaming about the memory he had just witnessed which was set in 1980...so a little confusing...

    Just thank you again, I feel very flattered now...lol...thanks for the review.

Title: Changes 11 Oct 2008 3:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your sense of humour! Nicely done. I hope that Snape lightens up as time goes on. Poor Harry, he really could use someone who cares about him, even if it IS Snape. Of course Snape will have to come to terms about being Harry's father first!

    Hope you update soon; I want to see if Snape DOES make breakie! ;)

    Author's Response:

    And Snape is ever so stubborn...lol...

    as to my sense of humour...people do tend to like it...I don't think I'm funny at all...lol...

    Harry does need someone to care for him...and having Snape be the person is just too good to pass up...lol...the possibilities behind those two...lol...

    As to Snape making breakfast...he does make breakfast...lol...I actually didn't go into it in the next chapter...as in I didn't write it but it is mentioned somewhere within it...

    anyways glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the review


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