| Title: Quidditch Try Outs
| 12 Aug 2020 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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When I first read the summary for this story I wasn't sure that I was going to like it. Now, after reading all the chapters that are up, I'm glad that I did decide to read it. It is a really interesting story. I like how the plot has developed so far, and I can't wait to read the rest.
That's great! I know I always feel great when I've finished one of my stories. It's a wonderful feeling and accomplishment.
I liked how you have Harry still using the book, but will there be a time when he trusts his father enough to tell him about it?
I liked the Quidditch tryouts too.
Another great chapter. I'm so glad that you're writing a sequel.
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