So Lucius was a spy also, how interesting. And I like the fact that Sev was trying to figure out Parseltongues, and that he let Harry call him Severus.
I have enjoyed this story a lot so far. Congratulations on writing a really good tale! You do have some areas of opportunity as far as grammar and certain expressions (making it obvious that English is not your native language), but they don't usually detract from comprehension.
I look forward to reading more!
Nice. I'm looking forward to your next chapter,and what will be revealed about Lucius!
Nice. I'm looking forward to your next chapter,and what will be revealed about Lucius!
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