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Reviews For Atoning The Past
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 3:00 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, although I noticed one typo--you said Snape "drowned a purple potion" it should be "downed". I'm glad Sev decided to include Harry in the discussion, he's old enough to learn what he's up against.

    I noticed that you mentioned you liked Draco, I have a story here that features him and Severus and Harry where Sev adopts Draco and he and Harry become brothers & Draco rejects being a DE. It's called Heir to Prince Manor, though Draco doesn't come until around chapter 8. If you want you can R&R it, thanks!

    Author's Response:

    ah, typos...I must have missed it...

    I've always felt that Dumbledore's overprotective nature kind of influenced how things turned out. If he had given Harry information about certain things a lot wouldn't have happened...so obviously Snape caught onto that...I mean had Dumbledore mentioned there was a prophecy what would have happened...would Harry have gone to the department of mysteries? No.

     ooo...a fanfic...I'll keep it in mind and attempt to read it soon...I might have seen it around actually...and I do think I have seen you in particular around so as soon as I get some free time I shall find your fic and read it...

    thanks for the review and glad you're liking it

Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: ITrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this.
    Just two chapters and I am already hooked.
    Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Hooking people in...very cool. I'm glad you're enjoying my little ficcy here...and thanks for the review...
Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1 23 Sep 2008 2:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I love how you made us feel Harry's grief at Sirius' death; I fought back the tears myself when Harry cried!

    Very nice; I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response:

    I did that, really?

    lol

     I never feel like my writing can do that...I don't know but I def. know what you mean having read amazing fics like that...

    Is it bad I'm glad I could make you cry? Lol...no...but I am flattered by having so much power...-insert evil laugh here- anyhow I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and just thanks for the review...

Title: The Wards and Occlumency 20 Sep 2008 10:57 am
Reviewer: june (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it so far!!

    Author's Response:

    glad you're liking it! enjoy next chapter

Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 10:29 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start!!!

    Author's Response: thanks...glad you're liking it.
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very nice chapter! I really hope that you'll write more and post it here)
    Looking forward to it)

    Author's Response: thanks! glad you're really enjoying this...have fun reading next chapter
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 19 Sep 2008 2:27 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks like an interesting story. Too bad about Draco.

    Author's Response: I love Draco. He's one of my favorite characters of the Harry Potter world and think that if he had really had a choice he wouldn't have become a death eater...and maybe I just made him one so that I could portray that...but yeah I really don't like him being a death eater much...anyways thanks for reading and hope you enjoy next chapter
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. Need a bit of work on your sentence structure, but overall a very good premise. Keep at it. Continuous writing and reading really helps hone your skills.

    Author's Response: My english teacher nearly always puts that on my papers...sentence structure...anyway, thanks for reading and enjoy next chapter.
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice beginning. I'm guessing that Harry is what-fifteen, sixteen?

    I'm looking forward to your update, I'm very anxious to see Harry's reaction to Snape being his father. I think that is my favourite part in Severitus stories! That and when Snape finds out (when he doesn't know already).

    Author's Response:

    He's fifteen in the first chapter and is turning sixteen in chapter two...

    I love reading the reactions too! Anyways enjoy next chapter.

Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 9:32 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it so far. It's pretty well written and I love Tonks and the rest of the Order. Not sure about Snape yet, he seems to be softening pretty quickly, but maybe that's just because it's way too late for me to be up. In any case, it's an interesting story that I look forward to following.

    Author's Response: Snape is both a little hard on Harry and softening in the first chapter...but don't think he's OOC yet...he's that way for a reason. I hate when assumptions are made about a character as to how they act without knowledge of what happened before this character came into the scene...anyway thanks for the review. I love Tonks and the most members of the order...and enjoy next chapter

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