Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 12:08 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    I really REALLY loved this! Little Harry, obviously raised surrounded by love, has every adult in the castle wrapped around his little finger. Absolutely delightful! Thank you so much.

    Author's Response: You're welcome! I confess I really enjoyed writing it - such a happy universe for Harry, instead of his "real" one.
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 10:04 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely marvelous! It's such a cute story. I really hope you will be inspired and write more of that ^_^ Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll post a prequel and you can let me know what you think. :)
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 8:13 am
Reviewer: mmcgonagall (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent. I loved it. I would love to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming up, so be sure to let me know what you think. :)
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 6:23 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Two words; too cute! ^_^ That about sums it up, lol. Great interaction and the Sirius story was funny.

    Author's Response: LOL! I'm hoping that was "too cute" in a good way! :)
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 5:39 am
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! lol! that was adorable! what a good idea! I can just imagine severus worrying that he'd hit too hard :)

    Author's Response:

    LOL! I know what you mean - I can really picture Sev just panicking while Harry is completely undisturbed.... ;)

Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 5:04 am
Reviewer: Aleu-n-Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    That was such a sweet ending. The line about the lemon drops made me giggle, they are my favorite candy too ^^

    It was a really cute one shot, and I think that it would be great as a full length fic/novel/story/what-ever-you-want-to-call-it

    Author's Response: LOL! Well, I'll post a prequel now, and you let me know if you want more.
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 4:57 am
Reviewer: Lanelane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an awesome story, it would be amazing if you would continue it. I just love the Harry/Snape time. But it was really REALLY funny when you described how bad Sirius was at punishing him and the shopping spree. LOL! Hope to read more soon!!

    Author's Response: Ha ha! I'm glad you enjoyed that part. I just have a really hard time imagining Sirius (especially an Azkaban-free Sirius) being able to play the disciplinarian. :)
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 4:22 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I remember reading this on ff.net. Adorable...and humorous. It's easy for me to believe that Minerva would be more strict than Severus. He became close with Draco while Minerva continued calling Harry "Potter" throughout his years at Hogwarts.

    These lines made me smile:

    Harry sniffled. “Yes, Unca Sevewus.”

    “I told you to stop that ridiculous lisp,” he glared. “It has absolutely no effect on me. I wouldn’t have punished the house elves anyway.”

    “Yes, Unca Sevewus.” Harry nodded vigorously.

    **LOL. Sev's stern resolve is so transparent. I love it.

    Yes, keep writing. I enjoyed this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your highlighting the lines that worked for you. :)
Title: Encounter with a Squid 24 Sep 2008 3:09 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes please! I loved it, I was laughing at how Harry knew just what buttons to push with Sev and how Sev gave him some punishment but not enough to be abusive. I also liked how Minerva knew what to say to make Harry really sorry about what he did. Her words hurt more than the spanking, which is how it should be. The part with the ruler was hilarious, I laughed like an idiot.

    Your Sev reminds me a bit of the AU series I'm writing called Never Again, where Sev marries Lily after James' death and adopts Harry and raises him. It's posted on here if you want to take a look at it. I orginally began it with Never Again, with a six-year-old Harry and a Severus who was a Healer & Potions Master. I've since added a sequel and am working on the prequel too.

    Author's Response: Your story is great! I love it - and yes, I like the fact that in both our AU's, we show how Sev could have ended up very differently if he'd had someone to love. :)

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