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Reviews For Encounter with a Squid
Author's Response: You're welcome! I confess I really enjoyed writing it - such a happy universe for Harry, instead of his "real" one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll post a prequel and you can let me know what you think. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming up, so be sure to let me know what you think. :)
Author's Response: LOL! I'm hoping that was "too cute" in a good way! :)
Author's Response: LOL! I know what you mean - I can really picture Sev just panicking while Harry is completely undisturbed.... ;)
It was a really cute one shot, and I think that it would be great as a full length fic/novel/story/what-ever-you-want-to-call-it Author's Response: LOL! Well, I'll post a prequel now, and you let me know if you want more.
Author's Response: Ha ha! I'm glad you enjoyed that part. I just have a really hard time imagining Sirius (especially an Azkaban-free Sirius) being able to play the disciplinarian. :)
These lines made me smile: Harry sniffled. “Yes, Unca Sevewus.” “I told you to stop that ridiculous lisp,” he glared. “It has absolutely no effect on me. I wouldn’t have punished the house elves anyway.” “Yes, Unca Sevewus.” Harry nodded vigorously. **LOL. Sev's stern resolve is so transparent. I love it. Yes, keep writing. I enjoyed this. Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your highlighting the lines that worked for you. :)
Your Sev reminds me a bit of the AU series I'm writing called Never Again, where Sev marries Lily after James' death and adopts Harry and raises him. It's posted on here if you want to take a look at it. I orginally began it with Never Again, with a six-year-old Harry and a Severus who was a Healer & Potions Master. I've since added a sequel and am working on the prequel too. Author's Response: Your story is great! I love it - and yes, I like the fact that in both our AU's, we show how Sev could have ended up very differently if he'd had someone to love. :) |
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