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Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 11:59 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Naughty Harry!

    Author's Response: Yeah, he is that, all right.
Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 1:34 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can remember doing something similar when I was that age and my father spanked me and grounded me after so I learned my lesson and hopefully so will Harry.

    Author's Response: Oh he will, believe me! He'll learn it good and proper.
Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 1:31 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, we all knew that was coming! harry's always been able to find trouble, and now he'll have to pay for it. Hopefully Sev won't be too harsh.

    Author's Response:

    yes, that's a fact Trouble and Harry are siblings. 

    As for Sev, you'll see what kind of punishment he deals out in the next chapter.

Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OOOH now Harry's in trouble! Poor kid! I'd hate to have Snape mad at me.

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response: So would I, believe me!
Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 12:29 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would not want to be Harry right now. I can understand the coolness of being invited to "play" with the big kids. I wonder if Snape will make Harry do something to repay the other people for pranking them. I can't wait until the next chapter.

    Author's Response: yes, he was tempted past bearing, in a way.  As for what Sev will do, you'll find out next chapter, he may do that, or something else.
Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 12:20 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Uh oh, them's fighting words. I'm not surprised Harry forgot all the rules, but now he's going to get a sore bottom because of it.

    Author's Response: Yes they are and yes, he is, poor thing!
Title: Following Trouble 08 Oct 2008 12:18 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh, Harry's going to get a good paddling, I think. Not that he doesn't deserve it, the little imp, but I still feel sorry for him.

    Author's Response:

    And you'd be right, and I feel bad too!

Title: Following Trouble 07 Oct 2008 9:40 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, yes, Harry is in such trouble. The broom should have been locked up, though.

    Come on, Severus, Harry is five. Five year olds can't hold out that long.

    But he is in trouble and so is the mutt

    Author's Response:

    You're right, but Sev wasn't really thinking logically at that point, his mind was on his work and he is a new parent who's bound to make a few mistakes. 

    Harry is in very big trouble though.  Not that he doesn't deserve to be. 

Title: Following Trouble 07 Oct 2008 7:18 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, what a place to end a chapter! mila

    Author's Response: I wanted to give you something to look forward to, LOL! But Harry isn't going to look forward to it. :(

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